Seiten Tasei has anger issues...

great fic! excuse me, can you maybe tell me what exact Seiten Taisei and Toushin Taishi means? i know who they are, but i would like to know the exact translation

OMG i can totaly imagine this for some reason nataku will always be my favorite all time anime char I hate the fact that goku keeps on forgetting him (P.S i seriously want to stab nataku's dad with a knife over and over again fraiggin bastard low life *goes on ranting*) hope you make more goku/nataku fics THE WORLD NEEDS MORE NATAKU

Wow...just wow. This is completely how I envisioned Seiten Taisei's views on Nataku. Seriously, you have made me quite happy. His anger towards Goku and the whole sun thing is perfectly exploited, and the whole fake Konzen stuff is awesome!

X3 Most importantly, I loved the ways he fantasized. So cute, in a sick perverted sense!

This site needs more Nataku *whimpers* He's already made it to my favorite characters list, and the poor thing gets no love. Nothing wrong with how you worried about him seeming like he was portryed as a thing. Taisei's lovable and all, but his forceful nature can make things seem that way. XD Thanks a lot for a great read. I REALLY enjoyed it.

TT: That was really cute, and so in character that I almost squealed! Great job in transitioning, emphasis and imagery!

Kai: Yes. Surprising that this doesn't have any reviews (yet). Bt this is a beautiful (and slightly mortifying) one-shot. Great job.