:O :speechless:

Wah!! Where have you been all this time! (well, I haven't been around lately too so why complain?):P
This was a cute little story. Though I haven't read Warg's story, I did get a hint of how they were like. Their relationship is a bit touching, that even in such a gloomy time (and talking about something sad as leaving), they've still managed to be happy and optimistic. Nicely done!:P

This was a very nice take on the two brothers. I liked how you showed how comfortable they were with one another, poking and teasing even at an emotional time. I always like your writing so I am glad you are back.

You're back!

Note to self: Must send chocolate to Lolo popoki's muse.

Wonderful one-shot. The camaraderie between brothers was perfect. You caught the older to younger sibling dynamic - Yura full of questions and Ryu simultaneously admonishing yet not so serious that he could resist ruffling his brother's hair.

The homecoming part was infinitely satisfying too. Interspersing what Ryu saw and thought with those short 'my' sentences worked as a great lead in to the last two lines.

Excellent all around!

This is really good!! =3

^_^

what can I say.. apart from i LOVE it..

Plain and simple, perfection.. lovely tone.. and a very nice undercurrent.

Thank You.. and oh yea, sorry for the pushing and nudging.. hehehe

I'm looking forward to seeing you in the next exchange too.
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Hi!

Excellent! I loved the exchange between the two brothers, one poking the other and getting whacked for his trouble. It just added that lovely bit of realism to the story. And what Ryu said was true, if somewhat simplistic. But let's face it, he's from a country village, and not exactly steeped in political intrigue. I'm very happy to see your muse come visiting. I'm looking forward to more of your wonderful stories. Don't worry about reviewing, either. It's not a problem. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Terry