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My-Arabian-Knight 2008-07-12 ch 6, anon.	abusePoor Victoria. I hope she's going to be okay, and that alejandro finds her. Can't wait to read more!! Update asap!
iccy 2008-03-10 ch 4,	abusewow, what a great story! i love it so much, and i think it's great that u wrote it from a girl's p.o.v.!
My-Arabian-Knight 2008-02-01 ch 4,	abuseYes! you finally updated! I can't wait for you to update again (hopefully not in another four months. . lol) and find out what happens! yay! Update !
tiogasnowwolf 2008-01-17 ch 3,	abuseO.O Evil cliffy. Continue or my head shall explode!! crazy eyes No, really. Continue. I really, really, really, really wanna see what happens next... and at the end. QUOTE: "I can only write in parts because of school and my assignments. Anyways, please enjoy." Yes. School stinks in more ways than it fries your brain in a manner fit for a BBQ. But, it's comendable that you writing as much as you are. Most people don't, and that makes me sad. Anyway, thanks for posting! I hope to see more soon! waves Adds to fav story and story alert list AND fav author list
outthere101 2008-01-10 ch 3,	abuseI love it, its good so far, try using big words they make simple sentences pop more like: the dog barked. compared to: the beast savagly sreamed its bark at me in agravation. its fun you should try it.:)
My-Arabian-Knight 2007-10-26 ch 3,	abuseYay! If others do not review, and i do a whole bunch of times, does that count and will you continue? I love this story, i can't wait to see who was holding her, may be you said, maybe you didn, but i'm lost about that, so please update so i can find out. :)
dumbblonde76 2007-10-25 ch 2,	abusehey...for some reason i couldn't get my review to send for chapter 3, so this review is really for that chapter...not that it really makes a difference... anyway, i hope you end up continuing your story... i would like to know what happens. :D
My-Arabian-Knight 2007-10-23 ch 2,	abuseOOH I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON I REALLY ENJOY THIS STORY :)
dumbblonde76 2007-10-14 ch 4,	abuseplease post it soon!
dumbblonde76 2007-04-28 ch 3,	abusei hope you plan on updating this! :(
PippinBaggins 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseConstructive critisism: A few grammatical errors here and there, nothing huge. There were a few modern terms--like "homework", "boyfriend", "broke up", and "dating". Here are some 1800s translations for you: homwork would be called 'lessons'. Boyfriend would be 'beau' (pronounced boe). Broke up would be described differently, like "breaking off our relationship" or "not seeing eachother anymore" or "calling it off". Dating would be "seeing eachother". Praise: Tu espanol esta muy bueno! (Your spanish is very good!) The plot seems typical but portrayed well. I like that the horses actually have personalities. A very good start. I like it.
smithcrafter 2007-01-04 ch 4,	abuseThis is a fanfiction site, not a sale bill.
brokendream21 2007-01-02 ch 3,	abuseHm...I really like this story so far. I feel bad for Victoria. Her life seems to have taken a bad turn. I can believe that a man would attack a girl. =\ But the fact that she manged to outsmart him made me smile. Keep up the great work, and I hope you update soon! Katherine
JainaZekk621 2007-01-01 ch 4,	abuseLittle confusing...But interesting! DO continue!!
J0ofez 2006-12-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice story Tori! I am a stranger to Zorro though I like your use of the characters. Your writing style is so good, near-perfect. I can't wait for more! Laterz _ J0ofez

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