This was great, very well written. Thumbs up for you, keep writing :)

I really liked this story! It's short but thoughtful, and filled with many delightful, pretty images. This sort of introspective has always been one of my favorites. Thanks for writing it!

Pretty good.. brings back many memories of the game.

I like this, it's a very sweet tale. But I also like how you captured the unpleasantness of Quistis' past since all we ever knew was that it didn't work out. Your delivery was interesting and the conclusion keeping in tone with the rest of the story.

that was unbelievably sweet, i really liked the fact that quistis and rinoa are friends in this.

That was really sweet.