 VENI4 2009-11-04 . chapter 10I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of this story. It is so well written and the characterization if flawless. Bravo! |
 TAANGfan 2009-11-03 . chapter 10 You're story has made me so happy! I just found it today and devoured it! LOL!
Somewhere in the first ch you said somethng like not to expect anything too passionate or deep, but I'm afraid I have to tell you, this was both. Sure, there are no extravagant declarations, no heated arguments, but who needs that when you managed to capture the quiet intensity between Aang and Toph so well! I love that they are so beyond words, they can just be. *happy sigh*
Thank you so much for writing this! *hearts you* |
 TAANGfan 2009-11-03 . chapter 9 I LOVE YOUR STORY! And I just wanted to point out that there was nothing cheesy about this chapter, it was very sweet and so romantic! *swoons* |
 hehe 2009-09-16 . chapter 10 thanks SO much for writing this! i just enjoyed a lot! I really do wish that you would consider writing an epilogue! Thanks! (by the way i would love a reply from you at )THANK YOU! |
 sunnyvibes 2009-07-20 . chapter 10Even though I wish Toph and Aang kissed just once, it was still an excellent story through and through :). |
 MTBlack 2009-07-08 . chapter 10I wanted a little,little, little kiss between theem! (?)
Jejeje, but despite the lack of kissing, jaja, I loved it! :)
I really did! It was amazing! I mean it was like an incredible action movie!
Oh, gossh! I'm so glad someone recommended me to read itt! :)
I found very pleasant that you keep telling us about the other people and their lifes. I mean, I like the way you went on with the lifes of the other characters :)
I love Sokka! and Little Ai Li Zhen and the power she has over her father! :P jojo I used to have that kind of power, but then I grew up and lost it! :( jajaj
You're awesome! And totally rocks! :) jajajaja
I loved how it began, the way he founds out he's in love with her (I loved Zuko's words about him missing Katara), i loved the end... they're right, it's perfect, even if they don't kiss, jeje
And guess what!? I'm gonna send you a PM asking permission to translate it 'cause I loved it! :D
CU :) |
 younggem 2009-06-06 . chapter 10AW(: |
 Katherine-Lupin-ENVER 2009-04-18 . chapter 10I LOVE YOUR FIC! ITS AWESOME! can you believe that I read it only in one night? I started at 8 I think and I didnt sleep till I finished it that was almost like 11.00 o'clock of the other day ajaajajaj. But I didnt review the couse my ¬¬ lazy Internet conection decided just then broke down T.T
Well I have one doubt though. Are they together? I mean like a couple?! Because they never said the tipical "I love you" or anything!!
well in the end is good anyway
kisses
Kat |
 ZKF 2008-11-06 . chapter 10I really liked this story! You did a great job! It would have been nice to have at least a little kiss between Toph and Aang, but it was still great! |
 arizony 2008-10-31 . chapter 10No complaints here. Just a satisfied reader. Good job overall. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
 nicole 2008-10-06 . chapter 4 This chapter ROCKED I mean is so cool how you really captured her emotions. yeah really corny but too bAD |
 Yuehswind 2008-08-24 . chapter 10I love the ending. You did a great job with this!
I also like how it's a sequel to ROTR. |
 hyper233 2008-08-14 . chapter 10Damage, your story was a bit too slow in the events departmet.if you write another story try to speed things up a little. Im not saying just rush the plot and make it lightning speed action, but a little faster would be better. Also way to break the mold on this one. I mean every story out there nowadays follows the formula 1. marry up, 2. have a bunch of kids, and 3. live happily ever after as a group of friends. Not to say its a bad to do that, just maybe some more originality. Especially in the characters themsevles. I know that doing that is harder and some people dont like ooc or anything new, but it generally if done right makes for a better story. Also regarding the ending its just a little strange that toph would go trough all of that for her right to travel with aang (and to not be disowned) just to go to aang ohh yeah your my friend and thats all i need from you. All in all, it was a good story that id read again, and ill be expecting more from you! |
 Shadowhawke 2008-08-09 . chapter 10Beautiful, I loved this so much. It was great to see the growing relationship between Toph and Aang, and hilarious to see the other members of the Gaang dance around them. Awesome work. And I adored your Zuko and Katara moments... their banter was the best. Thanks again for such an awesome read! |
 ristakay 2008-08-08 . chapter 10 This story is wonderful, not only because of its accurate characterizations, but also because of its creativity. I love the way Toph and Aang's budding relationship is portrayed because it actually seems plausible. Those two definitely compliment each other quite well, whether it be purely platonic or romantic. Great job! |