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Shadeehue
2009-09-07 . chapter 14
Love your drabbles! (and all your other writing) ^^
Cataclysmic Tears
2009-09-05 . chapter 10
Wow. That is so Hikari and Takishima!! What horrible things happened when you were drunk??
ChristinaAngel
2009-06-14 . chapter 14
I liked seeing Neji and Tenten's relationship from a third person's POV especially one that is slightly more positive than the other POV. Not fond of the whole 'Neji controlling Tenten' thing but I liked the description of how the Hyuugas liked her and their arguments.
Aww the hair one was sweet and I liked how they both did something as close as brushing each other's hair.
anthropomorphichybrid
2009-05-13 . chapter 14
Too lazy to log in ... anyhoo, nice job. Looking forward to you updating Hanamachi! Love that fic! er ... not that this isn't any good ... *shuffles away*
SnowCharms
2009-05-08 . chapter 14
Lol, though I had hoped for Tenten to have silky smooth hair. I wonder if her hair will still unravel if she kept is in a ponytail. Update!!
wirbil
2009-05-08 . chapter 14
:3 I see hair is very important, neh? This chapter was so~ cute! I hope you update soon. ^^
Unices
2009-05-08 . chapter 14
I like these little one shots. Keep it up.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2009-05-07 . chapter 14
Wow...Neji combing some1 ELSE'S hair...IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD!
talapadme
2009-04-28 . chapter 13
That's really quite true. Everything that was said about TenTen and Neji and males and females in general. Short but sweet...I LIKE it! The part about the arguments I found particularly humorous. You really understand the characters and it shows through your writing.
Update as soon as you can! I can't wait to read!
Lots of Love,
Talapadme
anthropomorphichybrid
2009-04-26 . chapter 13
An interesting take on Neji and Tenten's relationship ... I like it! With Shika's analytical thinking and Ino's pure girlish, idealistic fluff, they annotate the two's relationship quite well.
Unices
2009-04-25 . chapter 13
LOL that was so perfect. Write more on this
Elephantie
2009-04-25 . chapter 13
i liked how you made them talk about neji and tenten
that was refreshing, to see something new
and i really like shikaino although not nearly as much as i love nejiten XD
SnowCharms
2009-04-25 . chapter 13
Well, at least Neji is well and truly whipped by Tenten. If Naruto would act more politely then perhaps the Hyuuga wouldn't hate him that much, though I rather have NAruto being himself. Update!
un4getabl3mem0ries
2009-04-24 . chapter 13
Loved reading the friends/outsiders' view of Neji & Tenten's relationship =] Refreshing and cute
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2009-04-24 . chapter 13
And what can we say about Ino and Shikamaru's relationship?...*Sigh*
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