i lurve your story.

Bravo! This story was amazeing and It's going to my favorites, keep up the good work!
Toodles!
SS180

Well it was an awesome story while it lasted!! NO! DON'T WALK TORWARDS THE BRIGHT LIGHT! hehe jkjk... well, Good luck with your future stories! I 'll be waiting for your upcoming work and i look forward to reading more from you! Until then though-
mucho amor,
~JaX

Very kwl, only I wish Julie was more secretive about her identity, that would have brought in alot more entertainment for the reader. Vry gd tho. ^_^

Authorqueen xx

Cool. :) And I am certain that Julie will rib her parents about how it took her presence to get them together. :)

haha, Woah... Nice chappie! Really good! Update ASAP pls!
mucho amor,
~JaX

aww this story was so good...

Nice chappie! I just noticed... your really good at 'Starfire talk'... haha sry, i suck at it though, and its good to see that atleast one person on fanfic knows how to write it! Can't wait for the update!
mucho amor,
~JaX

keep goin

Hey!! I really like your story hope you can post real soon. Well bye!!


-mei

OOH! PLEASE UPDATE! ME LOVE THIS STORY! SOON! I LOVE BB AND RAVEN TOGETHER!

ok no[t a cliffy but still a good ending plz tell us what happens to rob/star couple i just want to know

This is not a flame, nor is it intended to put you down in any way, shape or form. I'll give the good points after the constructive criticism.

Some of these points may be mute because of your age, blah blah blah... I don't personally know you, so this is objective.

The spelling is terrible. Luckily it's understandable due to the context it's used in. Occasionally words are replaced with other words that sound or are spelled similarly, and the meaning makes no sense.

The grammar used is horribly incorrect a good percentage of the time. Also watch tenses in your wording.

Syntax (sentance structure) is choppy and often jumbled or senseless. For the most part they are depthless and simple.

There's a tendancy to repeat the same thing over again two or three different ways.

I'm unsure if you wanted to write in a plain manner, but there's scarcely any detail. Some things are dangerously vague.

However:

The story has a good title.

The plot is reasonably decent, and very workable.

The characters are all used, no one being left out as in many fluff fics.

Starfire's dialogue is realistic.

If one could get over the technicals and simplicity, it was enjoyable to read!

It was good enough to add you to my alerts list.

Great chapter! LOL! Starfire loves to flirt with Robin... Merry Christmas! God bless!

Nice chappie! Not much else to say...
~JaX