Awe! Dear Yellowfang got to be with her love again! I always wondered about how Yellowfang would be accepted into StarClan. Excellent job on the details and the portrayel characters, especially on Yellowfang's. Hope to hear more from you!

WHOO! ONCE AGAIN! THIS IS TOTTALLY AWESOME! WRITE A WARRIORS STORY! I BET THAT WILL BE BETTER THEN YOUR ONESHOTS! But there was only two problems, Yellowfang is brown, not gray, and Cinderpelt was Cinderpaw at that time.

It didn't make me break down in tears, but I think you did a really good job! Maybe it's just that I don't have emotions..? I'm going to write one about Raggedstar and Yellowfang too, totally different from yours, but involving both cats and Brokentail all the same!

Again, this was great, but, of course, so sad! Good job, and keep writing. :D

Aw... your oneshots always make me cry! Keep writing them! By the way, you're on my Favorite Authors list, I just forgot to mention that in my last review.