I liked it and it was pretty good

Wow, another great piece of work by you. I'm not so sure about the fox features as I'm not the greatest furry fan but the hey, it made for a good read and original idea.

I say you do a fic where they both get fox-ed.

i dont review very often but i quite enjoyed this one shot, i'd love to find more fan-fics with simuler plots but it doesnt seam to come up much

i love it

Awesome Story!

foxy love...LOL

Oohh-hoo-hoo-hoo-hoo *Perverted giggle/squeel* hehehehehe, please do write more, i definitely like hina-chan all foxed out, though i think naru should go all foxy with her and we'd have a pair of horny, animalistic kitsunes, ne? *maniacal hand-gestures* hehehehe wouldn't that be great *has widest most perverted wolfish grin known to man* heheheehehehehee i definitely am gonna read that last one you got, especially if there's more foxy bits of the two of them, hehehehe bacon... sorry but i seriously need to get my fox now, this stuff is getting me all excited and i should pay attention to my own fox once in a while *rubs hands together with evil wolfy grin* hehehehehehehehee, bacon!

till next *perverted grin* Sayounara, Stunt-sama

*stalks off to find a certain blue fox*

-Ikasury

I liked your story alot but i think lemons aren't allowed on

I would suggest either editing your story or moving your story to a new site (the only one i can think of is

I won't report you for this but I suggest you at least make sure you have a copy on your computer as a backup in case you're reported.

good story i think you should create one that combines these two maybe call it the love of two monsters i dont know just doesnt seem right that one is turned into a kitsune while the other isnt

hey great story

You know, you should write one where they BOTH become monsters :-).

LOVE THE BACON JOKE! funny as hell! yeah there was a lot of spelling mistakes. really good story tho!

This was a sweet story.

It's not that bad. A little bit of mistakes here and there but nothing to bad. Maybe you should make one where they both go into a demon form.