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| prettiful pout 2006-11-19 ch 1,  | abuseawwe! That was so cute and sad and totally Nick and Greg! You pegged their personalities perfectly. A few mixups with like grammar and spelling mut nothing terrible. Great writing job! ;) |
| mary2000 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon I would like to see how things are going for Greg and Nick now, Is greg still staying at Nick's place so he can feel safe or what? |
| Zombie Kitty 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abusevery cute!...in an angsty way of course - but I'm seriously hating the writers for doing this to Greg - sure he is needing more storylines, but ones that completly wreck what was left of him as that funny, silly lab tech probably isn't good. I'm not really a massive greg/nick fan to be honest - but i still loved this fic so much - poor greg! |
| Ivy3 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseNice angst, poor poor Greg, I'm just glad Nick's there to keep him safe. A typo *You think after what you told me, that I’d let you out of my site"- SIGHT not site, you've had this mistake twice. Nice job. |