It's an interesting take on the comeback, but one thing doesn't make sense XD

Eighteen years had passed. Almost two decades years sinc

*points up* So eighteen years have passed.

By the time his sixteenth birthday had arrived, Sasuke had fundamentaly ch

*points up* uhm...so he's sixteen, and he betrayed konoha eighteen years ago. Something doesn't fit XD

Either way, it was good. XD

Tenshi-Battosai

This would be an amazing ending to Naruto. Great work! n_n

Great story and all but what about naruto becoming hokage. ah dam. oh well good short fic!