Wow, really good. I am glad John (Pyro) got a second chance, some people deserve them. The ending was funny, but I would have never pictured John being the type to write books. Good job!

That was really good! It was well written and you did a great job keeping everyone in character, John and Bobby were incredibly well written, I could totally see them saying and doing what you wrote. I also liked the appearance of Mystique, very cool. Great job!

Very good characterization of Bobby and John. I like this pairing, even when they are 'just' friends. :)

Great fic. I loved that last line. "What kind of sissy writes romance novels?" that was funny! great job!

I LOVE this story! Please, write more Pyro fics@! :)

Wow, this was great, your writing was amazing! This story is going straight to my favorites!

AUGH SO FAVORITED. This was fantastic-you managed to redeem John AND keep him in character, and that's not easy! John's past and parents were believable, and the whole thing flowed well.

This was fantastic-Thanks so much for sharing!

Wow, I loved this fic! Great work!