 Celes Tempest 2006-11-16 . chapter 1Despite a few typos, this has the makings of a really interesting story. Even if it will be nothing like the wonderful Rendezvous With Fate, I've no doubt that it will be a very fun read. ^_^
I await the next chapter with great anticipation. (As long as you don't neglect Rend, iCe-sama, though I doubt you would. ;P)
(Yes, I know, I already e-mailed a review, but I figure this story needs more on-site reviews so people will notice it.) |
 kilalakitten 2006-11-11 . chapter 1 I really like this story! I read alot, so I think I kind of know where you're going with this. I just don't know all the details. :-) Good work, but there were some grammatical errors you should get looked at; nothing too serious though. I'm really interested in how this is going to end. You should definitely continue to write it...oh, and hurry up with the next chapter!! :-) |