Wow... Amazing... This is a marvelous piece of writing. I love the way you've painted this story in a way with different colors and the very poignant metaphors and comparisons.

Wonderfully done...

The beauty of this piece is comparable only to the gorgeousness of you loveley self, my darling.

Yay! ^_^ Perfect.

...I honestly don't know what to say now since I've basically told you my opinions already. To sum up...beautifully moving, perfectly described, short but meaningful...

My favorite part is the description of the sunset. ^_^ And my favorite line: "Their joined hands, still coated crimson by a dying sun." *swoon*

Wonderful as always, Eli-chan. :D *hug* And I'm always glad to help. Thanks for being patient with me.

-Kara

OMG, a new story! And so poetic and sweet! So beautiful!

So, how are you? I'm off in Iceland on holiday at the moment and got to Thailand on Tuesday :D Not a lot of time for writing, but now that I'm done studying I might have the time :D

The way you described this moment was beautiful. Excellent job Eli-chan. ^_^

This was very beautiful, I loved the descriptions you used here, espicially with the sun. Describing how it was setting and I could vividly picture everything you described. The thoughts of the characters were well played out here simply by showing their actions. I found the tone of your story very suitable, you kept it at a nice, slow, steady pace which it needed to create and display bunny and darien's feelings. I really liked the line at the end, "she would endure-not devote", just a nice line to leave the story at. It's the ending thought and shows how much they mean to each other.
Thank you for uploading such a lovely story.