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kkm-crazyfan24
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
i love the song!
Uzumaki-Kat-Insane-Kunoichi
2008-05-29 . chapter 1
Kat: Wow, I loved this story! It was so sad-happy, and well-written. Did you write that song yourself? If not, could you tell me who sings it? It sounds like it'd be pretty...Oh, and if you did write it, I'm so impressed!
radioactive edelweiss
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Yay
So purty
AnimeBabe456
2007-06-25 . chapter 1
OMG!! That made me cry, seriously. Awesome fantastic job. =D

Also, is it just me, or do you notice that Amy Lee's voice reminds you of Wolfram's if he could speak English? 'Cause everytime I listen to Evanescence on my iPod, it reminds me of Wolf singing it (voice and lyrics-wise). ^.^

Definately my all-time fave. It had a happy ending, it was amazing!

Also, the part when you said "Shinou gave me a second chance", I was SHOCKED. I was like, "HOLY CRAP!" I read a story on LiveJournal called "One Last Time", and Wolfram dies of a disease that doesn't let him speak, and he writes on a piece of paper to Yuuri, "Make love to me, one last time." And he dies in the end, and I was thinking of making my own sequel where Shinou would give him a second chance or something. =D

I'm making this a huge deal when I shouldn't be, haha, sorry, but I got excited that you got the same idea with Yuuri. xD

Amazing story, always going to be my faovirte now.

~Kristen
Nadir and Blue Wings
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
I was wondering, is the song that Wolfram sang a real one? If so, would you please mind telling me who the singer is? (through PM/email)

If not, then you composed it? It was really /WONDERFUL/.

This fic is so good. Just correct some grammar mistake/typos and I can safely that is near perfection. As in, like only a hair strand away from it. =3

Please write more! We need more GOOD Yuuram fics like this!
Naaja
2006-11-14 . chapter 1
...do you know that i love you?

i almost cried when wolf sang...
maldita08
2006-11-13 . chapter 1
Mou, you almost freaked me out. I thought you're going to end the story in angst. When you wrote:

"There was a sheepish smile from the King on the doorway. The King was wearing a plain white shirt and a pair of white trousers, and in the moonlight, Wolfram thought he looked like an angel."

I thought Wolf saw yuuri's ghost!It's a good thing that you end the story in a happy note because I wouldn't want to have Wolfram mourning forever! Btw, its a nice story!
Zeldazoey
2006-11-12 . chapter 1
wow~I like it~~

I like happy ending~I was so afraid when I saw tragedy in the front page...

keep it up~ ^^
the-amazing-author
2006-11-11 . chapter 1
i listening to the song
and i swear im really emotional right now from this
this is so sad!
i love the fact that it fits so well with the song
i didnt find any mistakes either!
really good!
i loved it!
pity i read it in like 3 minutes! i didnt get to finish the song!
lol
i read too fast
TT
love the story!
keep writing!
Sayoko Bizen
2006-11-11 . chapter 1
i understand that this is a one-shot and the song part was great, but you need to explain what circumstances caused the attack on Yuuri.

keep writing!
Daikaio
2006-11-11 . chapter 1
This was sad, but I'm appreciating the ending ^^
Sober.xTouch
2006-11-11 . chapter 1
Hey! *Cries* For a second I thought u were gonna let Wolfram wallow in pity and mourn for the rest of his life 'cause Yuuri died but... YUURI SHOWED! I LOVE YOU! ty for making it a happy ending! also... in the beginning, the first sentence, u wrote "The stoic walls were echoing his footsteps, letting him KNEW, aware, that he was... Shouldn't it be 'KNOW'? anyway, besides that, it was boody brilliant! *Hurriedly adds to my favorites!* Yay... well, good luck!
Yuka Hasumi
2006-11-11 . chapter 1
aww so nice... its a yay! :P
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