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| CedarPineSpruce 2007-10-28 ch 14,  | abuseLovely! This story felt like a fully produced television episode. I should let you know that McKay is reducing the level of love. Reading your stories back to back, gives me a McKay overload that I rather avoid. |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2007-01-14 ch 14, | abuseGreat ending. |
| seanait 2007-01-10 ch 14, anon. | abuseYAY! *sigh* another story come and gone... but this story was worth reading! i loved it! thank you so much for sharing with us! great job and great story!! yes, more stories soon!! ~shay~ |
| Razzbaby 2007-01-07 ch 7, | abuseOkay so what the hey?? Janet and Bregmann going somewhete? Well do tell. Hope you tell us more! Please! Good new part! |
| Razzbaby 2007-01-07 ch 6, | abuseMcKay is so over the top! He is just so annoying! And he so wants to gloat that Ian missed the Ancient gene. teehee. Good new part. I feel sorry for General Brooks. He's not use to sending his son out onto missions! Can't wait to see how Nathan reacts when SG1 is really late! LOL Or worse comes in hot! Oh yeah! |
| Razzbaby 2007-01-07 ch 2, | abuseOh this is cool -- teehee. couldn't resist the very bad pun. And healed Ian. This will be good. |
| kissmekent 2007-01-05 ch 14, | abusecute story, keep up the great writing! |
| SchattenTanzer 2007-01-05 ch 14, | abuseawesome |
| sissybear 2007-01-05 ch 14, | abuseoh my word, just like all your stories, i absolutely loved it and can't wait to see what you have in store for the end. although that's with mixed emotions, your stories are wonderful and as unrealistic as it sounds it would be amazing if you could keep going lol. well, keep up the GREAT work!! |
| Evilclone 2006-12-31 ch 14, | abuseShort and sweet, just like me :D I look frward to the next one, (in the future?) |
| Ilovesg1 2006-12-30 ch 14, | abuseI enjoyed the story (except for the most irritating, annoying, pain in the arse, did I say annoying, McKay). I would have loved to hear how Nathan could explain sending in the Marines for a 5 minute delay. Loved the dogs involvement but it was to short. |
| Heather 2006-12-30 ch 14, anon. | abuseLoved this mission. Very sorry to hear that you only have one more story planned in this series. I have really enjoyed reading all of the campter and Jaffer stories. thank you |
| scottiedog 2006-12-30 ch 14, | abuseI am looking forward to the last story of this series! This is a really great series to get into when it is cold, windy and rainy. Good Job! |
| LcNessie 2006-12-29 ch 13, | abuseOh, I can just imagine the looks on the faces of SGs 3 and 4 now... ^.^ Merry Chrismass and a happy new year to you too, btw... Albeit that the first one is a tad late... |
| Heather 2006-12-27 ch 13, anon. | abuseSo will Ian be picked on about his father sending a rescue when they were only 7 minutes late? Looking forward to more. thank you |