 Glandrie 2009-09-05 . chapter 8This story is one of the best i've ever read, all your stories are amazing, i'm already waiting for Clashing Spells, Instincts, Married Uchihas and this one to be updated.
you're an amazing writer, keep it up!
can't wait for the next chapters!! |
 severe cold 2007-10-24 . chapter 6This one was very funny! (I know i said I won't write until tommorow, but I just couldn't restrain myself, and I wanted to be your 100th reviewer! Congratulations!). I really liked it when Kakashi was teasing Sakura, that kind of perverted thoughts suits him very well - but, on the other hand, I think I haven't read a fic in which Kakashi was NOT a perv. It'd just like Sasuke without his smirk and infamous "Hn"s. There's not such thing as not perverted Kakashi. |
 severe cold 2007-10-24 . chapter 5Wow, this one's one of the most romantic stories I've read. Forbiden love, secret meetings, suppressed desire, smoldering, hidden gazes... ::heavy sigh:: I just hope that they'll end up happilly together, no Sheakspear-like dying crap. Only thing against it is her father, but cannot they just run away - that's what friends're for, right? They should run to Suna with Naruto's or Kakashi's help, hoping that her father won't find them, or simply face him. You haven't given us many datils of the setting if the story yet, so I don't know if Sasuke's from "respectable" family, but he's not from bad one for sure, if the jerk with a stick in his ass (aka Saskura's father - funny it'd usually mean Sasuke) entrusted him his only daughter. I hope you'll write what he has (the jerk) against their relationship (I know he probably has never gave a though of such a possibility, but I wonder what his reaction would be). Besides I think it's better to confess to him about their secret, then be caught hmm... in the "act". That will be the worst possible outcome!
I sorry i rumble endlessly what the charachters should do, or think through the possibilities (or so it seems), but I suck at writing normal reviews, they're just way to formal to me. But I really enjoyed reading your story (as well as few others, though I haven't reviewed them, sorry, maybe I will later). It's starnge 'cause usually just romance stories turn out to be boring for me, because thier authors often rush the story, not knowing what else, besides quick "getting together" they could write about. Well, your story's deffinately not like it (they're together at the very beginning), and it's really interesting, in the way that makes you want to read the rest of chapters, which unfortnately I'll do tommorow, because it's half past midnight here, I'm dead-tired and have to wake up at 7 next day. |