Desperate Axel. Slap Roxas again to get your answer. :)

Wow.
I liked it.
Seriously beautiful, yo.
:)

Absolutely lovely.

And I understood it completely.

Beautiful and desperate, excellent.

I'm blown away.

I don't get it! they're your wat?!?

Wh- what?! WAIT A SEC! Hold on!
His what?! What's Axel's?!
Dammit I wanna know!
Well... I'm guessing it's something poetic and I'm guessing it might be...
His feelings?
I dunno... I just didn't get this one...
Which is weird cause I usually get your fictions... Oh well...
*bliss*

Is it bad that I'm happy to see Axel in charge of a situation? He almost never gets to smack Roxas around (god that sounds wrong). This was so beautiful though. Really, it was. I adored it!

I just. Wow.

It was simply gorgeous and heartbreaking and oh, Axel and Roxas. I'm beyond coherency here.

Just spectacular, and a lovely, lovely piece.

wow.
=]
just... wow.

i havent been back reading the kh fics for a while.

but i always love yours. so here i am.

and i love this. the summary alone was pretty sweet.

axel pimp slapping is so otp. haha.

well im off. :]

You definetely fulfilled your prompt. I'm so confused. ;__;
But in a good way. You captured my full attention in such a short time. I love your stories. :')

Exact words for this moment:

...Whoa... whoa.. WHOA, BIZZY-CHAN, oh, my goodness!

Now for the constructiveness? Maybe. I adore this... honestly, I do... I really do. Very sad and heartwrenching and I adore it...

YOU KEEL ME DEAD WITH SAD.

Love.

Mostly because Axel needs to take a turn doing the smacking.