Really cute onen through the hole story i had the song in mind, hah beautiful.
Do you know "** as folk"? They have one story written around this song as well, watch it- but stop after the song's finished, you'll find it at youtube.

it is so cute!

Oh ...soo sweet ..!

hey nice fic really i really liked it yay! finally heero and duo together thank you for the fic!

^__^ That was a sweet, sweet one shot. And quite a realistically human Heero. That was very nice.

Totemo kawaii! (uber cute) I loved it, it was... soothing, conclusive yet open ended, and just... beautiful... Great job!

Awesome story. A little too sybolistic for Heero's personality but I like the analogy. Thanks for the cool fic.
~Akire

WEEP! It was a wonderful, sappy story- I LOVE SAP!- sometimes. It wasn't cheesy. I'm glad Heero got his last dance with his faithful comrade. Duo is such a sexy male- and to be loved by Heero- well EP! *giggles goofily* I'm an adult acting like a crazed teen. HECK, I'm acting like Relena-san, ack!

This is a great story, I hope you write so much more! It was one of the sweetest hook-up stories I've ever read and the idea was very unique and well-written.
There are only a few basic errors (typos) and I hope that you don't mind if I point them out for you.
The first is when Heero is scanning the floor for his "braided friend". Heero states he wonders where he would "had" been, not "have" been. Where Heero is agreeing with the basics of Duo's views toward upper society, you could have a semicolon in the longest sentence, which describes how a tie can be a disadvantage. When you describe Trowa and Quatre dancing, it would sound better if you said, "and were now dancing cheek-to-cheek". As Heero is describing his dance with Duo, you put the words "could" and "only" together on accident. As Duo is bowing to Relena, it would sound better if you said, "Duo had never been on very good terms..." Later, in the same paragraph, it would flow better if you said "night out on the town". As Heero analyzes Quatre and Relena's relationship, it would work better if you said, "She had respect for Quatre for his..." The next paragraph, in the third sentence, needs a little work, but I don't know why. After Heero states who he wants his last dance with, the next paragraph also needs work on fixing a few typos.

I loved it! I thought it was wonderful and so true to life. Great job. Huggles
Nikkler

i just had to review! :) because it was really sweet how heero just said "dance with me always", especially how duo reacted. he just nodded and leaned closer. and they just danced. THAT WAS AWSOME. so subtle yet sweeter than any other complicated getting-together scene. i love it! good job!

I loved it!! It was very nicely written!

...It wasn't just acceptable, that was beautiful! If that didn't break your writers block, then I don't know what will... I wish I could fave it, but my faves are full. :c

beautifully written :)