   StarVix 3/5/07 . chapter 2Alright there's more! Don't worry about your fight scene, I can't write them well either. |
| Phantom Angel 7/3/01 . chapter 2 WOW! I REALLY LIKE THIS! PLEASE DON"T STOP! |
| Neon Light 6/26/01 . chapter 2 It is a well written story, but a predictable Gambit and Rogue line. Add a little spice to it! |
| Opaque 6/23/01 . chapter 1 Oh I remember this! cool! I finally get to tell you how much i like your stuff! |
| T 6/21/01 . chapter 2 Great story, can't wait for more! |
| Wildcard186 6/21/01 . chapter 2 Great! I'm looking forward to reading the next parts! Kudos! |
| Metroprincess 6/20/01 . chapter 2 Very impressive...you've got some nice characterization here. Looking forward to more(if fanfiction.net keeps working)! :) Rachel |
| RogueBHS 6/20/01 . chapter 2 Very Nice! ::applauds:: Keep up the great work! |
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