great.

That was really amusing! Great job! :)

Luv it write more!

That was adorable. I loved it. :D

This is my first review. I've wanted to leave reviews for so long but have never taken the time to look for that darn password to my account lol. I love your story of course. i have added it to my fav list ty for writing it and hope to here more.

Oh my gosh this is too cute! Aww, the Father/son bonding over trash can heads was just priceless! My only regret is that I didn't think of it... ;-)

Thanks for the great one-shot!

This is pretty funny. I like the idea of using a trash can to teach Jason to use his x-ray vision.

Loving this! More to it?

Using XRay vision to see through trash cans. Who knew?
Made me laugh.

im pressin the little purpe button
that was awesome
i laughed a lot
i luv it

ha! ha! ilove it! it's hilarious! hhee, clark and Jason, Lois is doomed... hehe

really cute

That is SO cute! I looked at your profile; that is SO cool that you are also a christian! Now I really don't feel alone on this website! Infact, I'm finding more and more christian authors all over the place! YAY! Oh, and don't worry they're aren't any cliffs around my house(though I think this cold will do the job=)).

Clark-o-vision Forever!
G.A. Clive

This is really good. I would like to see more- possibly on this story, or maybe a continuation? Maybe just another story idea? I love the picture of father and son frankensteining around the living room wearing trash cans! :-)

Oh, Sean, that was wonderful! I had such a good chuckle out of that. I could see Brandon and Kate with this, but it got even funnier thinking about the original pairing. I love that Clark doesn't take himself so seriously that he can't get down to his son's level to make things easier for him to understand.

There's just something about having her come in and see him, even in plain clothes, wandering around with a trashcan on his head, playing Godzilla with his son to teach him a lesson on X-Ray vision. So precious!