Wow you pegged Fleur! Great fictlet.

Interesting POV.

Right she is!

I cannot accept Fleur being all-shallow. First Mme Maxime took her along and then the goblet selected her to represent Beauxbatons in the Triwizard tournament. This indicates someone of capability and a fierce will!

I took the Remus-reference wrongly first, but it's good even then: Tonks was Molly's favourite for Bill, wasn't she? And she took the scarless werewolf... leaving the man with the scars for Fleur. No risk for competition here!

Fleur appears shallow though, if she married Bill for his alleged fertility alone. She admires his knowledge and his personal charms, too.

A great story. Very good.

Very Fleur-ish. Good job :)

Love it~

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Lovely and sensitive little ficlet. I really like the idea with Lupin's non-existent scars.

It's nice to get back to HP-fics from time to time, especially when one finds pearls like this.

konban wa

"You see, I have noticed that the brave Professor Lupin has none himself. / Full werewolves heal quickly."

Ah, that simple statement said so much. Since Bill will have such scars, it proves he isn't a full werewolf. It's just... you could have said it any way - could have said it outright, and I love that you chose not to. You went with the cryptic (albeit somehow obvious) words, which made the statement oh-so beautiful. Kudos.

Ha det
-Shan-

An interesting snapshot of what must go on in Fleur's mind.

I wouldn't worry about the accent thing. I imagine that she would write this sort of thing in her diary and perhaps someone would translate it, leaving it without an accent, too.

Lovely work. What a great perspective into Fleur's background. You gave good tone to her character and kept her well in canon. It was like her perfect mask of perfection came down for a brief moment and exposed her heart. I really enjoyed the read.

Thank you for reading and reviewing my work, by the way. I appreciate your time, and value your insight.

Take care,
~A.V.W.D

I liked, it Fleur after book 6 became one of my favorite charaters. She really has a good heart.

Wow, never quite looked at Fleur that way.. hey, I like Harry Potter too - well, ok who doesn't - but this was really interesting and the bit about Lockhart - hahaha! *almost laughed out loud in my office*
Finally, I've only written for manga before so it's nice to meet someone who's over d age of 17 - for once... LOL... I'm in my late 30's... sh!

Some pretty interesting thoughts from Fleur. I always thought the end of HBP showed that she wasn't completely shallow, and you've shown us a glimpse of that with this story . . . which I think should be a bit longer.

I haven't read beyond "Goblet," so I have only vague knowledge of the situation you're describing, but I think your story is good.