Poor April! But Luke has seen Rory grow up and so he has that connection with her. Of course, it's not April's fault he didn't see her grow up, but unfortunately there isn't much she can do to fix it now...
Loved the Trory part!

I just kinda go through a tour of your stories and remembering why you're one of my fave GG authors! I liked the take on this story, from April's POV with still a hint of Trory in it! ;) I enjoyed the "outsider's" view of the father/daughter relationship between Rory & Luke.

I've never seen someone look so closely at April before. Well done. I saw her, could truly see her in this, and it was full of the turmoil you brought forth. Two girls, torn apart by one man who means the world to them.

This was one of your best yet! I loved the different angle you took with this one, it was so creative! It was really neat seeing April's side of the story and that Luke and Rory were close once again!

Again Loved it and you are a fantastic writer! Keep up the Great work!

Mangoes2oo5 ;)

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what inspired you to write something so different than the usual fics about april and rory? It's almost always the other way around.

Good job on it.
Liek all the other fics that your write.
nice

Interesting !

Lovely. Simply, yet spectacularly lovely. I want to read more April-centric fics. She's a great character, in my opinion.

Love it!
It's soo detailed, well written, insightful, inventive and and and!
And I love Tristin in it...lol, can't help it^^
Really really great work!
RESPECT =)

sounds like you really know what your talking about or you are just a fantastic writer...or you read my mind but with my father and my brother and me...
it was good...very very good.

i LOVE it! April's pint of view was written like a person who has a lot of insecurity about herself because she thinks(and sometimes is) she is only second best compared to others... Beautifully written...

very interesting perspective on April. well written and insightful. I liked it a lot.

wow...this was really good...I love that you have Tristan and Rory together in this! LOL...really great...felt so bad for April.

this was so good.

is there going to be a follow on?

You know what I love about your writing? That you remember EVERY last detail about everything, and you use the smallest details in your fics, things most people forget about, and make them mean something. Momo and the necklace, for instance. Two moments, nothing huge in the show, but in this fic, to this character, they're everything. They're the difference in two daughters, they're time that one can never get back, they're links to bonds that form by just being present. You're awesome at that stuff.

It's so interesting, knowing how you and most of us feel about April, to see the contrast of her looking at Rory as what she is, her predecessor and something she can't be. Which is one reason ASP just shouldn't have gone there in the first place, but if we're made to deal with her, you should definitely be the one in charge of it.

It's just perfect, in its flow, it taking one single moment and showing how the mind works its way around jealousy. It's, as always with you, in character, and it brings together characters that we haven't seen really interact much, if at all, but you know them all so well and represent them in such a way that we can SEE them doing it anyhow. I can see April reacting to Luke and Tristan, to Rory and Tristan, to poor Mitch--all of it.

Loved it. Thanks for being my buddy in the race to post. :D

ames