Hey, I just discovered this story and pretty much read it non-stop. Please update soon! I think Wesley is a great character, even if I don't agree with his theories on guns, violence, capital punishment, etc. Anyway, I think someone that would really confuse Wesley would be Deadpool (the comic version maybe, the character in the new Wolverine movie was good at the beginning, but not totally funny and amazing), what with him being crazy and all. But yeah, was the lady at the end Black Widow? Because that would be totally cool (I dressed up as her for Halloween two years ago). Please bring Ironman back into the story soon. I get the feeling that you like Jubilee as a character, which makes you awesome in my book. Once again, please update and thanks for writing this awesome story!

oops, just noticed that I neglected to review this chapter. It's not you, it's me :P Good chapter. and homeschooling rules :D

sigh. hate to say this to ya, but sorry, I think I'm done with this story. It just seems to lack substance ... like it's written in too much of a hurry, w/o enough proofing and revising to make it really shine. in the end, it just feels kind of ordinary ... and so I'd rather spend my time on something else.

It was a good idea; next time, just spend more time & care on the execution of it!

typical Jubes :)

The story has an unfinished, rough-draft feel to the writing style :( Were you in a hurry to push out these first chapters?

so, definitely not the Punisher!

Naturally, Pyro would make a ruckus. What else is he good for?! Hope he doesn't get just a slap on the wrist. And so... now Scott's going to be harping on Wesley, too, & not just Wolvie?

I've read thru chap 2, and it's fairly intriguing, but of course it's a slow starter so I'm sure it'll become more interesting in later chapters.

The new guy (your ordinary human) ... is "the Punisher", then? I've heard the name but I have no idea who that is since I never read any DC comics. Of course, that wouldn't exactly be an Original Character, would it, and you did say that he was OC. I guess I'll have to wait to figure out who Frank Castle is, then :)

... I do have a minor niggling beef with you over your statistics. "the mutant population will not rise over 5,0" worldwide, you said. The earth's population is 6 billion, with the USA pop compromising approx. 1/20th of that @ it's current 350 mil. 1/20th of 5,0 = 250. One gets the impression from the film that at LEAST 60 (if not 100+) students are at Xavier's school, and that it has been running for 10-15 years, continuously. ...by those numbers, almost the entire 250-member mutant population of the United States would have been through Xavier's at some point! So I think maybe you need to increase that statistic a wee bit :)

WE!
...really, that's all I can coherently say right now.

hm...So I guess Wes is pro-life.

I can respect that even if I don't agree.

I like the story but your end ANs sound like infomercials. lol.

Scott can be such a tool sometimes! ;)

Anyway, I really liked Xavier's reaction to the news. Jean seemed kind of blase about the whole thing, but at least she was so willing to admit she'd misjudged the situation. Logan was funny in his matter-of-fact acceptance that Jubilee would be riding back with Wesley.

The conversation regarding his words and the movie, etc. was charming and let them say a lot of things in a nice, non-confrontational way but still get it all out there. Hearing Wesley's resolve to not get involved that way again was reassuring. I hope he's able to hold to that.

I'm interested in seeing what happens with Tony down the road.

Great job! It was good to see another chapter from you. :)

Wanda

Ha, so Stark wasn't surprised at all! Great twist. I liked this chapter, especially the discussion with Jubilee at the end.

typo watch: "Could you show here to her room?", "the best campus on existence", and "Come’on" seems to be an odd contraction. And Daniel seems and odd name for a girl, perhaps Daniele or Danielle would be better?

I recently happened on this story and just wanted to drop a note to tell you that I find it very well thought out and very well written. I also like the addition of other Marvel characters (I think you did a fantastic job on the Punisher!) and the focus on background characters like Jubilee.

Sorry this review is so short...I'll try to write more next time for you! Keep up the good work!

Great job and congrats on the new truck. I'm glad Wesley got out and Jubilee and Logan got in. It's a good thing they met up when they did or his chances of escape would have been much worse. Especially fun was the reaction Wesley and Jubilee shared upon finding one another.

Wanda

EPIC. ESCAPE.
That was awesome!! I love how Wesley used the stuff Tony left to escape XD. Can't wait to see his expression when he finds out--that'd be quite entertaining. I can totally see this whole fiasco turning into a replay of Stryker's invasion on the X-Mansion when Stark finds out where Wesley lives. O_O Although I think Stark would do it himself, solo, rather than sending in a SWAT team. :P Anyway, I think this is your best chapter yet! Heaven knows real life needs more excitement, so it was nice to see an epicly awesome escape playing out in my head. :) Sorry I failed to review the last chapter, and thanks so much for the update! Keep up the good work!!

nice one! Yay, Wesley escaped and Jubilee and company were of some use :D
ha, Stark has a surprise coming :P