 fan-rei 2008-04-03 . chapter 10yes i missed your story.
i needed to reread it from the start. i'm a lost girl but it seems to be going better.
i wonder about kencara . at first she killed a lot of person but it seemed that she was defending herself. now she seems completly cruel and quit faillible. i thought she loved the past incarnation of ranma. her plan went awry without her?
is nabaiki ill? she 's often coughing.
and next is nabiki kencara ounterpart?
"Kencana grinned and thought to herself, “My plan may fail because of you, my little kitty?”" the demoness in the alternate universe talked about a kitty too and the owner of the kitty.
i hope you don't let to much this story on hiatus. thank you for writing. |
 glorfy 2007-11-17 . chapter 10 dont be so negative, i certainly missed it :P
glad to see you had the inspiration to write a bit more. i can ony hope you retain that till you complete this story.
good work, and thanks for the entertainment |
 Innortal 2007-11-17 . chapter 10Enticing as always. |
 Lerris 2007-08-05 . chapter 9An interesting story. It seems that you are mixing various things, some of which I have only a vague familiarity with i.e. (blessbringer/kencana). At any rate I look forward to seeing how this all turns out. |
 FF 2007-08-05 . chapter 9 this chapter was very very good. |
 Dax 2007-08-04 . chapter 9 :-). |
 Innortal 2007-08-04 . chapter 9Great imagery. Well done. |
 Mz-Kitty-Kat 2007-07-31 . chapter 8You Sir are such a tease! Ranma-kun you are so close! Make Nabiki-chan's lips yours!
Anywho, great update and more scenes are unraveling. I wonder how Nerima Crew will handle the situation now that they know the secret of Nerima's Chaos Magnet.
This chapter had a delightful mix of humour and suspense and I crave more. Please continue.
Again wonderful work and looking forward for more.
Sincerely,
Mz Kitty-Kat |
 Mz-Kitty-Kat 2007-07-31 . chapter 7ARGH!
MY HEAD HURTS! I THINK ITS GOING TO IMPLODE!
So Ranma maybe kencana's soul mate? But there's the flashback that still gives the impression that the little girl is Nabiki and my head hurts from trying to figure this story out! But in a good way (is there a good way of having a headache?)
I couldn't help but laugh that even creatures of the night cannot stomach Akane's cooking, but like I said before this story is just brilliant and makes me carve to read more. I still read this as Nabiki/Ranma subtle pairing so I'm still hoping that it will eventually lead to that but nonetheless the story is brilliant and cant wait to read more.
Ja Ne |
 Mz-Kitty-Kat 2007-07-31 . chapter 4Hi again!
I feel so wretched that I have neglected to leave a review for your story (even though I've read every update while on my break and waiting for my next classes), not voicing out my appreciation of how well written and mind boggling this story keeps getting.
I just loved how you write Nabiki and Ranma's interactions! Are you sure you're not going to pair them up? Please? Pretty please?
So Kencana's on the move and her plans are slowly being revealed, this is getting really interesting. And as always I will keep on reading and hopefully remembers to leave a review. But I really do enjoy this story especially coming up with my own theories of how Kencana is involved with Ranma and Nabiki somehow.
Oh well please continue your great work.
Sincerely,
Mz Kitty_Kat |
 Sargon Dorsai 2007-07-21 . chapter 8The world of magic and mystery has long been one that Ranma would be well suited too and it's always a pleasure to see those worlds brought into the Ranmaverse. Ranma as the reincarnation of chaos... who didn't see that coming? But there is something different about him that even the other reincarnation cannot identify. What makes him so unique?
I am loving Ranma's weapon. Once he learns to fully utilize the morphing abilities it will be interesting to see how much further he can go. Martial Arts are meant to be combined with weapons, no matter what Genma may say to the contrary. However, if you focus on one asect or the other you are limiting yourself. I'm interested to see how much Ranma's mother is able to teach him.
There are some points of the story that the shift in focus is a little hard to understand. You've improved since the beginning but still need to focus on smoother transitions from scene to scene. A little more description would be nice as well. Overall though, very enjoyable. I can see a lot of ways that the story can travel, though the main path seems set to me. Looking forward to seeing if you can surprise me. |
 Innortal 2007-07-21 . chapter 8Cool work, looking forward to further development. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2007-07-20 . chapter 8GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Time to tale the truth. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2007-07-20 . chapter 7GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Poor, poor vampires. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2007-07-20 . chapter 6GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Oh boy, Kencana is in house now. |