What was that about?Is that a story or a chapter in the middle of a story?I can't understand what it meant!

Great story! The only thing I would have done was to make the end (the part in reality) a little bit longer. But, other than that, great!

Its a BEAUTIFUL piece, that, for once, has finally captured just what Miaka and Tamahome were about. Its small, but it leaves you with half adorable warmth and half heartache. Yeah, basically, this rocks.

... That...was...AWESOME!

Oh, that was really nice. Your writing is amazing and the adjectives you used were fitting for what you wrote.
"The cold, and the rain, and the callous words coming out of his mouth that he couldn’t keep back…" - I thought this line was extremely effective.
Anyway, well done! It was realistic and believable. Plus it was a MIAKA and TAMAHOME pairing, which there aren't a lot of good ones unfortunately...-sigh-...Loved this. Thank you for posting it.

I, like the first review, love your writing! :)

Wow...*blinks back tears*
Your writing has a ethereal intensity that never fails to evoke emotion within me as I read. Your contrast of the coldness he feels being assauged by the warmth of Miaka's life essence was *extremely* effective.

Characterization wise, I can very much see Taka having these sort of dreams (nightmares), especially considering he essentially is carrying the memories of two people. If he'd bottled up these feelings of guilt, helplessness and self doubt, it could have resulted in him pushing Miaka away in the end instead of turning to her for comfort.

To sum up: I love your writing. ^_^

Lynne