I loved the symmetry of the last chapter, how the first and last sentences were mirror images of eachother. A very effetive plot element.

Great writing. I really loved, Rachel's 'let's do it' and Tobias, and everything. Though it was very sad.

I makes me so happy when fic authors can actually write. Some of your imagery is really lovely. You used correct grammar and everything! Also anything that contains the words "slapdash" "penumbra" and "acolyte" is probably a good thing in my book :)

Was it intentional that the Esplin and Elfangor chapter sounded sexual? Either way, I like!

oh. sorta depressing but i liked it.

Hey, I really enjoyed this! Please write more! It's very excellently written, but I think it would be even better if you added more to the contents of the chapter, and I'd personally love to read it if you decided to add other chapters! :D

short concentrated sweetnes. liked it alot.

I really like this. It's a nice little look into the Esplin/Elfangor relationship.

That was really great. Animorphs was one of my favorite book series when I was younger (and it still is...sh) and I always lament that there is not enough amazing fanfics for it. But luckily there are writers like you.

This was really good. You have a lot of talent, and I LOVE Esplin stories.

I personally don't agree with this part however: "Although he didn't believe in fate, or psychic phenomena he knew that the young Andalite prince was probably the truest enemy he would ever face in his life." - I think Visser One is the truest enemy he'd faced. And if two people KNOW each other, it's them. :P There's quite a bit of proof of that in Visser.

But anyway, that's my opinion, and you can have yours. I enjoyed it.

Sinister Shadow

PS - Speaking of Esplin stories, I also have quite a few of my own - Check out my profile if you need something to read. For a first read, I'd recommend Visser Three's Diary or Visser Three's Journal (sequel). My fics aren't about the hateful relationship between Elfangor and Esplin however, they're about the equally hateful relationship between Esplin and Visser One. Anyway, keep writing!