Plz update soon

Very cool story please update soon it rocks!

What a find! This is the best Evangelion fic in terms of realism that I have ever seen!

Cobarde is the sort of character I love, ruthless and possibly amoral. I of course say that because he's a fanfiction character if he were a real person I'd probably be running far, far away from him.

Great, awesome, superb fic.

Cool. please continue. ciao

Your Shinji compels me terribly. I find in him the deepest capabilities of humanity and an utter ruthlessness that makes me catch my breath. The culture shock that is Cobrade and is felt by Shinji is so spot on that it's almost surreal. I look forwards to more.

Eva bayonet charge yes, yes ,yes .:) cool

Really great fic so far. No complaints and my favorite scene was when gendo got beat. Keep writing please

I thought this was a fantastic chapter. The best part, in my opinion, was Shinji talking about orders and conflicting orders.

The question I have is: Unless I'm mistaken, the entry plug must be closed and inserted to begin the synchronization process. Even for the synch testing, the plug is at least closed. I didn't see a mention of the plug ejecting or opening, so I assume it's still closed and inserted.

How then, does a Remington .223 penetrate not only the entry plug but possibly the armor of the Eva unit?

I love the way you portray Shinji Ikari. Realistic. Even if I don't like the way you used Indonesia and East Timor, I can't help but think it's a correct assessment.

very good. it really is... gritty and excellent. This draws people in. it's superb!

I am not interested in pairings but rather the interaction of him between all of the other characters and so far, very good!

and please calm down. your chapters are all at great lengths.

This is a very hard core Shinji that's operating here - it would make total sense that he would respect SgtMaj Harrison more than any other person in NERV - he will absolutely do what he says he will do and (probably) not show fear doing it, along with understanding Shinji's battle tactics. Shinji hasn't had anyone act this way toward him probably since he left Red Spear.

If NERV has ANY kind of sense, they will make Harrison the assistant Ops Boss under Misato just to keep a leash on the Third Child. Shinji has been hard-wire programed to be a communist insurgent, he is absolutely willing and able to kill without hesitation. It's going to take someone just like that to control him. Keep up the great story, man.

Shinji's plan was insane - there's not way he could have anticipated that 'Above The Rainbow's' Skipper would've actually done that, then, continue to let to pilot.

Skill, good writing.

Very nice chapter, though I was confused who shot Shinji, the captain of the "Over the Rainbow," Misato, or someone else. You haven't updated this story in so long, I though you had given up. Keep up the good work.

Well, ain't that something. Putting a nice little "please leave a review" at the end of the chapter directly after your "Disclaimer to Annoying Fans". And how exactly are we supposed to review? We can't tell you what pairings we'd like to see, we can't tell you scenes we think would be good, we can't give you any advice on anything really because as you told us last chapter, "STOP TELLING ME WHAT TO WRITE!" So, what are we left with? We comment purely on what has already been written, being careful not to tell you to do more of something we liked, or not to suggest in any way, that while a section may have been weak, it should be changed. We have to remember that as you said "I LIKE WHAT I COME UP WITH!" and should any of us feel any differently you will run off and sulk again. I mean, are we supposed to believe you can handle any sort of criticism, constructive or otherwise after that little episode? The only thing left for us is to try to stroke your ego without mentioning specifics. Maybe "Thiz fik rox. Wryt moar plees! Yu get cookee :)" There, was that good for you? Perhaps asking for more was objectionable? Deal with it.

Enjoyed the chapter. Like how Cobarde has become similar to Gendo, despite the different upbringing.