Hum. I like the OC but perhaps only because I presumed her to be Yuffie. You're right, she is too alike (far in the story as I am) and for that, I dislike her.

Oi! This story is really good aswell as your Hate your Heroes and I really like your characterations (specially Yuffie and Vincent and the relationship between 'em)
Please update it? Huh? For me? xD

Lovin' Yuffie's phone rant :)

And the Vincent-stalking. Keep up the good work!

Nice story. The Yuffie-Vincent relationship is really cute. ^-^

Update, pretty please?

UPDATE THIS ONE TO please?

Okay.
How do I say this?
Blown. Away.
Amazing talent.
Cool (but scary - Yuffie can't die! xD) plot.
Hurry up and update. n.n
--skia

whe~
cute vinnie & yuffie interaction. :3
i really liked this chapter,
update when u can ~
x. kawaii eyez

oh a star where the sun doesn't shine!

YAY!!

I quite enjoyed the Yuffie centric in this chapter!
Keep up the great work!

I loved both chapters! great job!:D keep up the great work! lol
update soon.

-Lyndi

i hav a feeling that this ish going to get really dramatic in the end. unless they find a cure...which i am not considering to b likely. well as for chaos things. chaos comes out w/o vinnie noticing cuz when he ish weak or like hurt really badly or maybe just got knocked out or sumtin chaos wuld ** out. chaos ish really smart and he ish da grammer police nd he keeps making me type words right!

YAY! Here's where you ended it last time!! I'm really hoping you'd update soon! Kyah!

Oh and yes, thanks!!

Keep up the great work! Anxious for more!!

omg!!
yuffie is dying...
ZOMG!!
poor yuffie~
& baby doll is yuki. an oc i see...
well, this fict has got me hooked!
update when you can~
x. kawaii eyez

oouf he's still alive but yuffie... yay about chaos it would be nice to put him at some point (and the Dirge one)

"Yuffie is dying." =) Probably one of the best ways to end a chapter; announce the fact that one of the main characters is on a short trip to the graveyard. I remember reading this fic before; editing? Either way, I don't remember what exactly was wrong with her, so I'm looking forward to finding out again! And I love the fact that she hid it away from them, so they wouldn't have to suffer along with her. So Yuffie and yet so not. Hope to see more!