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| suripav 2008-03-12 ch 2, anon. | abusehey. post a new chapter. uve been taking a while on legacy. make a chapter 3... PLZ |
| john 2007-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse"There is absolutely no chance of this scene ever showing up in the Legacy due to what I have planned to happen." your going to kill hinata aren't you. |
| Draw4life 2007-07-10 ch 2, anon. | abusei like these little scenes. It will be interesting reading the chuunin exam battle scene between the new uzumaki and uchiha. that will be pretty cool. Will you continue to update chapters when you don't have inspiration for the new legacy? Cuz i look forward to what could happen in this story. Continue writing, and good luck in the war! ~Ryuu-chan~ |
| Shinigami-chan 2007-06-30 ch 2,  | abusethis seems intresting. i need some thing not that legacy has finished. |
| Herooftimes 2007-05-13 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter. i hope more come soon |
| XeroRami 2007-04-30 ch 2, | abuseTellemicus Sundance, I have not yet read your chronicles yet (because of these annoying things that I need to take care of called "sleep" and "school", in no particular order), but these "one-shots" are nice and light. They remind me of DragonBall Z, when everyone is training before the tournament when the magician and Kamis show up and Goku is dead but can return for the tournament. Anyhow, Vegeta and Trunks are training in a 100/200/400X gravity room and Trunks can hardly move. Then he goes supersaiyan and he's running around the room and fighting with and keeping up with his father. Pretty cool that! Anyhow, I'll read the chronicles, and don't forget to update this too sometimes. Thanks for beta-/proofreading for Dragon6's story/stories. He's also awesome. //XeroRami |
| Conceptor 2007-03-13 ch 2, | abusecool Naruto and Sasuke's sons facd off =) |
| hieiashke 2007-03-09 ch 2, | abuseah well, at least you're able to post it. I still have to get at least one story onto a paper! They always get stuck in chapter one, and not even worth to be a one-shot, dangnabbit! |
| Zoneshifter D 2007-03-08 ch 2, | abuseI thought this one was supposed to be a one shot? Well, whatever works for you man. I's short, but well written. You always tend to be meticulous in what you do when you write. Now if I could manage to get the words to flow easier in my drafts... |
| Bobboky 2007-03-08 ch 2, | abusecool |
| Artemis Ignitan 2007-03-08 ch 2, | abuseAww, that is a nice continuation of the story. It is really kinda cute that the rivalry continiues on through the family...^^ |
| Monks1 2007-03-07 ch 2, | abuseokay, since Sonic is taking to long, ill review it... its great! POST NOW! lol, well, i liked this chapter, although it took me awhile to figure out that this wasnt Naruto's kid and that it was Sasuke's... lol. |
| half-note 2007-03-07 ch 2, | abuseReal nice. A great change of scenario from what I've been reading lately, havin' trouble to find something worthy and interesting. So congrats! Hope you update soon. Great going. |
| Akira Stridder 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abusewoow what a story! like he said ...like father like son... |
| Gaurdianangelzelos 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abusevery good. You've probably heard this already, but i think you should make some more of these but with other Naruto pairings. Such as Shika/Ino or Shika/Temari (whichever one you prefer) or Neji/Tenten or something. I don't know, good luck with your other fic, haven't gotten around to read it yet but I just may. |