Wow this is getting interesting. :)Great story.

THis looked really good

Short but good. Do you want to bring Amy and Murdock together? I guess that wont be the best it is to obvious. bye bardofberlin

I am really enjoying this series. Please hurry with the next part.

Wow! Very, very good! Now I honestly can't tell where you're going with it. Is Face just reacting to the situation? Does Amy love him and is hurt because she thinks he's conning her? Does she really love Murdock? And where does Hannibal fit into the whole thing? And what about the bad guys? Aaaahhh! Too many questions! You're just going to have to hurry up with the next part because I can't stand it!