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Quill-32 2007-10-04 ch 4,	abuseOh, ow, if things hadn't turned out okay on screen I'm not sure I could bear to read this again! Yet it's a masterpiece as your stories always are, the slow evolution and the quick crumbling. sniffle Always makes me want to use the clue bat on Grissom.
NickyStokes 2007-08-10 ch 4,	abusewhat a phenomenal story, the characters were captured so perfect, I'm only hoping you write a sequel to this...
hope-passion 2007-05-13 ch 4,	abuseoutstanding... really! I love the end scene, in her head: it's good and fast, like a confused reaction. I also love her reaction and how you fit the whole story in wih canon. very cool It doesn't need anymore; we saw the sequel on tv already!
cabooklover21 2007-03-01 ch 4,	abuseSequel? This ending, although very good, seems a bit incomplete. I really enjoyed this story and I'm in the mood for some more angst and a more definitive ending.
NickyStokes 2007-01-15 ch 3,	abuseWonderfully written, and I absolutely love how much detail and length you put into your chapters. I am waiting for more..
smokeinmirror 2007-01-11 ch 4,	abuseYet another wonderful chapter, but it can't just end there, right? I really hope that you would consider a sequel in the future!
4NZic 2007-01-11 ch 4,	abuseThere were times whilst reading this chapter that I sat back and thought that it was better than the books I pay money to read. Your insights into the characters and into life in general are fantastic. I always find something that stops me in my tracks and makes me read it again just to enjoy it one more time. In particular I thought the first seven paragraphs of this chapter were great examples of your insights into both of the characters and into the way life's events can make them/us that way. You obviously think long and hard about the characters of Sara and Grissom and what motivates them to behave the way they do. You capture them so perfectly. Thank you, it is always a pleasure to read your work.
lamcsi 2007-01-10 ch 4,	abuseThis can't be the end. There must be another chapter after Grissom comes back. It feels so unfinished.
anneruhland 2007-01-10 ch 4,	abuseBeautifully written, Sad ending. I think that you have captured the spirit of Sara's thoughts and fears. Since I always wear rose colored glasses I hope that this does not tear then apart and that when he comes back they will still be together. I hope you write a sequel to this story telling that story. But even if you don't this one is very good. Thanks, anne
Buzzy 2007-01-10 ch 4, anon.	abuseWOW! Fantastic story. Then again all your stories are great! You really left us hanging with the ending --is a sequel in the works?
Beuller 2007-01-10 ch 4,	abuseI really enjoy your writing and am so glad you've returned to the pen for CSI. But, The End? Right here--right now? I don't think I can accept that one. Unles...of course...you have something else in the works...
fugimermaid 2007-01-10 ch 4,	abusewhy would i expect anything other than fabulous out of you?? it was terrific. touching, personal, descriptive like no other. thanks for sharing, as always. xo-sara
Jaded Chord 2007-01-10 ch 4,	abuseThank you for sharing this brilliant, gorgeous piece. I loved how you managed to incorporate events to complement the episodes in Season 7 so far. Grissom and Sara are both wonderfully complex characters with very real emotions and thoughts, and you did an excellent job of portraying that and their relationship. The characterization was flawless, and the dialogue was spot-on. Well done. Well done indeed. This story is going on my 'Favourites' list.
Kristafied 2007-01-10 ch 4,	abuse"The End?!!" Augh! You can't stop now! This is too good to let it end here. Outstanding Sara POV: I love how we see Grissom so completely through her eyes. It's a lovely portrait of their intimacy, and the exchange at the end of this chapter about him leaving is the beginning of the next part of the story. (Hint, hint.) Wonderful writing.
Chicklit 2007-01-09 ch 4,	abuseOh, the angst! I really enjoyed your take on Sara's inner dialogue and I hope you'll continue with this story as the season progresses. You really hit the nail on the head with this final chapter -- Grissom doesn't get it, and Sara's too insecure to tell him about it. Angst! Better angst than DOOM, though... Thanks!

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