 amnerine 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I really loved how in-depth you made this particular fic, and the amount of thought that went into developing the character. Even though it skipped around a bit (Neji being 22, then 17, etc) that didn't detract from the style at all. I really enjoyed this fic ^^
Aria |
 Funky Bracelet Chick 2009-11-07 . chapter 1omg. this. was. A-MAZ-ING. i love it. *stands in awe of the awesomeness of this fic* |
 fancyspinner 2009-11-03 . chapter 1This sstory makes me like Neji. Ah so I was right, the cut and the seel first thing to pop into my mind. Team Gai ...yes. I do love this team. Thanks a million for this fic. |
 devoted2charmed 2009-09-24 . chapter 1brilliant. absolutely brilliant. |
 Jimm 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Very powerful piece. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
 uzumaki rairakku 2009-09-15 . chapter 1you are a genius. this is one of the best one-shots i've ever read! sometimes i wonder what it would be like if neji was a member of team 7, or naruto was a member of team gai... -hinthint- or maybe if the two teams swap members so that neji and naruto are on the same team. there's not much stopping neji and naruto from becoming close friends (especially as naruto is one of the people neji respects the most and naruto is -only- the friendliest person ever)
i like your characterization of gai. it's quite retarded when fic authors make him no more than a randomly ranting idiot, is it not? sure, gai is rather strange, but his heart's in the right place, and it's a big heart too, and that's all that really matters anyway.
your characterization of neji is the best. ever. it's perfectly believable, and shows a side of neji that isn't quite expected. i love the hiashi's handwriting part (:
do post more twenty _ fics! i love them ^^ and this one always puts a smile on my face (i think it's the fifth time i've hunted down this fic to read it haha) your Twenty Times Uzumaki Naruto Didn't Die is also genius, but much, much more gory. ;D |
 Meatzman2 2009-09-06 . chapter 1I'm in tears, this is so sad, proud, ultimately brilliant. Wonderful fanfiction, thank you for the privilege. |
 paleconsequences 2009-08-19 . chapter 1oh wow that was amazing, omg i think i have tears in my eyes?! wow... |
 raven147 2009-08-02 . chapter 1This was a good cross-section of Neji's character. I can't really say much more than 'good job'. (plenty of others have already given you lavish praises, of course) |
 This is getting old 2009-07-16 . chapter 1Beautiful and vary emotional,Kraken. Extreamly good read! |
 Heartplay 2009-07-04 . chapter 1beautiful! you really made me appreciate neji's character. thanks. :) |
 xxxfallenskyxxx 2009-07-01 . chapter 1This was an amazing take on Neji's character. It really liked how you showed his thoughts and his other side. |
 Coco-Minu 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Neji is a character we do not really know everything about, unlike Team Seven. It makes this interesting to read, and the first parts about his name to me were the most interesting. I like this a lot. |
 I HATE THE LETTER Q 2009-06-25 . chapter 1it's so cute and so sad at times, i like almost cried at one time cuz' it was so sad. but i loved the story it was really good! |
 Mesonoxian 2009-04-19 . chapter 1I was really really touched.It was very nice.Really. |