OMG! since this is my favorite pairing in this game I really have to say I LOVE THIS! it makes me cry, then this made feel a little angry with Natalia, but anyway, the words of Luke was just so beautiful lovely work~

Being a Luke+Tear shipper, the effect of this fic is diminished for me. But you do bring up some good points. I personally don't think he ever liked Natalia, she was just a nussiance to me I think. He was too busy dreaming about Master Van! XD. I don't think Natalia abandoned Luke she never got to know the New Luke because she was hoping for the Old Luke to come back. Only Guy knew the new Luke adn that is why only he wated at the Spring for him to come back.

Awwe... how sad... it does fit exactly how he feels. Plus I do like the idea of Natalia with Luke..

aaw *glomps Luke* awesome job, I loved it ^.^

omg wow what a sweet oneshot! the title could have been better, but i love how all the feelings were shaped into words. The ending especially was my favorite! I didn't finish the game yet, but at least I understood your story xD

I look forward to your stories~

Oh, an angst fiction centered on Luke. I did feel bad for him in a way. I think this is the first LukexNatalia I've come across, and it's good.

-thinks- For some reason.. this feels very... familiar... As if.. I read it before, I'm not sure but... For some reason it just.. does o_o

Any ways, interesting take x) I've always wanted to see a sort of NataliaxLuke-ish storeh.

To bad it isn't quite a chapter story x) but great oneshot~

That's an interesting take on things... I never really thought that Luke liked Natalia romantically, but she was still supposedly his cousin. He would still care about her and be hurt when she suddenly drops him for Asch. I was happy that at least Guy recognized that while Luke might not be the kid they remembered from seven years ago, he was still a person and their friend. ^^

Very nice job with the story. It made me think.

Owie. That hurts... That whole replica crud is evil. *sigh* This site needs an Abyss section.

OMG! thats so sad- yes we know Lukes a replica but we all know that he has feeling too! but your right though- Natalia only really cares for asch- after akzeriuth, she didn't rly care for our Luke at all- meh, i like luke a LOT better than asch- asch is kinda mean and rude- while lukes rly trying to change- not too mention he looks much cuter with short hair!! ;) but great story! Luke has feeling too! BOO natalia- go for Tear! ^^ great job- thanks for writing Abyss stories!

I love it! It made want to cry. It was so sad. I never like LukexNatalia, but this just got thinking maybe it possible's. I would love to continue, but I'm afraid that if I do, I'll cry. Awesome one-shot!*goes to cry in a corner*