I like this very much. :) Law/Loa/Roa has always interested me, he's so perceptive and knows how to endure but realizes resistance is futile, and I love how you write his voice. Also, how Greed calls Martel and Dorochet the kids shows how he was really protective of him which is pretty interesting compared to the rest of the story and then what actually happens. o_o

"And now he was allowing Kimbley to fight him, hurt him, because he wanted to see how far the alchemist would go."That's a very intuitive and accurate description.

Wow. The way you write Roa is absolutely spot on.

Well, I really liked that, and it wasn't bad at all! I like Law as a main character in stories such as these, and I agree, he's not used as often as he should be.

Just wanted to tell you this is an awesome Law Introspection. Law is so seldom looked into and I think it's a shame. I find Greed fascinating, and like to see how the rest of his crew copes with him.

The character of Greed to me was a paradox, and his relationship with his 'people' intriguing... SEQUEL! Please you have to follow this up. I can feel a great story here, I CAN FEEL IT!

This was magnificent. It was deep and meaningful, while still true to my sense of the depth of each char. Really awesome!

LATER. ROGUEFURY

I really like it! :3 *dance* Gotta love Greed! xD The title reminds me of an X-Files episode. x3

Ooh, I really like this. Hope you continue it soon. Please?

-Greenbird

This is very pretty, and well written.

You may have 2 boxes of cookies, and a bowl of pudding.

Wonderful. Now write GreedxMartel porn.