Well, I really liked that, and it wasn't bad at all! ^^ I like Law as a main character in stories such as these, and I agree, he's not used as often as he should be.

Just wanted to tell you this is an awesome Law Introspection. Law is so seldom looked into and I think it's a shame. I find Greed fascinating, and like to see how the rest of his crew copes with him.

The character of Greed to me was a paradox, and his relationship with his 'people' intriguing... SEQUEL! Please you have to follow this up. I can feel a great story here, I CAN FEEL IT!

This was magnificent. It was deep and meaningful, while still true to my sense of the depth of each char. Really awesome!

LATER. ROGUEFURY

I really like it! :3 *dance* Gotta love Greed! xD The title reminds me of an X-Files episode. x3

Ooh, I really like this. Hope you continue it soon. Please?
-Greenbird

This is very pretty, and well written.
You may have 2 boxes of cookies, and a bowl of pudding.

Wonderful. Now write GreedxMartel **.