| Reviews for The Pitfalls of Seduction |
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Caramelized 2/3/13 . chapter 3the dirty mind line though. ohmygod. i cracked and my roommate is sleeping. but amazing job on that xD. I really hope you update sometime! I wanna see how this turns out, especially with those pictures in mind :P |
Guest 9/16/12 . chapter 3 LOL this chapter was just fantastic! naruto and shikamaru are hilarious, the girls are hilarious, YOU are hilarious. everyone's character was perf. i really hope you come back to this, please update soon, i would love to see how the seduction works out! shikaino woot :D |
Guest 9/16/12 . chapter 2 oh my goodness! great job keeping everyone in character - this chapter was hilarious. can't wait to see how you write the seduction. :D (sogladitwasntactuallytemari) |
Guest 9/16/12 . chapter 1 bahaha sounds fabulous already! love your writing. |
SI5EVA 8/26/12 . chapter 2So the plot thickens. I expect more good things. Chuckle chuckle. |
SI5EVA 8/26/12 . chapter 1Ohohoho. Sakura, you are quite the conniving, evil mastermind. I like so far. :D |
shourin 7/21/10 . chapter 3and do tell me, where arer the other chapters? lol |
SI5EVA 7/10/10 . chapter 3Oh, poor Ino, the woes of blackmail... Pfft, who am I kidding? I love it! 8D That was obscenely hilarious and practically overflowing with awesomeness. The characters couldn't have had better roles in this interestingly cute but diabolical romantic comedy. Who can resist the allure of Konoha's top kunoichi plotting for the good of a blonde mind-controller? I certainly can't, especially when you write as well as you do. ;) Please update soon; shockingly enough, I'm sure the best is yet to come. x3 |
Cutiedust 6/6/10 . chapter 3OMG! I couldn't stop laughing that was sooo hilarious! keep it up :] |
Alis Volat Propris 8/26/09 . chapter 3Wonderful. Love the humor in your fics. would love to see this finished. |
Devil'sLittleBabyGirl 6/18/09 . chapter 3 You're now officially my new fav writer. What can I say? You're just too amazing to be ignored. Keep this story flowing, can't wait to see what will Ino do, with her usual crazyness.. |
BlackRoseMuffin 6/3/09 . chapter 3lol. nice. I like the pick-up lines. |
iNsAnE nO bAkA 6/1/09 . chapter 3OMG! *dies laughing* This is awesome and it hasn't even gotten to the good part yet! :P |
Mooncatcher 1/23/09 . chapter 3Okay. Here's a good one: My lips are skittles, wanna taste the rainbow? Hahahahaha. Poor Shikamaru. No idea what he's in for. Fab story! Love it! |
laughingstick 12/11/08 . chapter 3lol the pickup lines rock XD what? u haven't updated this story in a year? UPDATE I DEMAND YOU UPDATE! great story btw, and especially humourous too. and lastly, UPDATE! i wanna know what happens! |