|Reviews for The Pitfalls of Seduction|
| Caramelized 2/3/13 . chapter 3
the dirty mind line though.
i cracked and my roommate is sleeping.
but amazing job on that xD.
I really hope you update sometime! I wanna see how this turns out, especially with those pictures in mind :P
| Guest 9/16/12 . chapter 3
LOL this chapter was just fantastic! naruto and shikamaru are hilarious, the girls are hilarious, YOU are hilarious. everyone's character was perf. i really hope you come back to this, please update soon, i would love to see how the seduction works out! shikaino woot :D
| Guest 9/16/12 . chapter 2
oh my goodness! great job keeping everyone in character - this chapter was hilarious. can't wait to see how you write the seduction. :D
| Guest 9/16/12 . chapter 1
bahaha sounds fabulous already! love your writing.
| SI5EVA 8/26/12 . chapter 2
So the plot thickens. I expect more good things. Chuckle chuckle.
| SI5EVA 8/26/12 . chapter 1
Ohohoho. Sakura, you are quite the conniving, evil mastermind. I like so far. :D
| shourin 7/21/10 . chapter 3
and do tell me, where arer the other chapters? lol
| SI5EVA 7/10/10 . chapter 3
Oh, poor Ino, the woes of blackmail... Pfft, who am I kidding? I love it! 8D
That was obscenely hilarious and practically overflowing with awesomeness. The characters couldn't have had better roles in this interestingly cute but diabolical romantic comedy. Who can resist the allure of Konoha's top kunoichi plotting for the good of a blonde mind-controller? I certainly can't, especially when you write as well as you do. ;)
Please update soon; shockingly enough, I'm sure the best is yet to come. x3
| Cutiedust 6/6/10 . chapter 3
OMG! I couldn't stop laughing that was sooo hilarious! keep it up :]
| Alis Volat Propris 8/26/09 . chapter 3
Wonderful. Love the humor in your fics. would love to see this finished.
| Devil'sLittleBabyGirl 6/18/09 . chapter 3
You're now officially my new fav writer. What can I say? You're just too amazing to be ignored. Keep this story flowing, can't wait to see what will Ino do, with her usual crazyness..
| BlackRoseMuffin 6/3/09 . chapter 3
I like the pick-up lines.
| iNsAnE nO bAkA 6/1/09 . chapter 3
OMG! *dies laughing* This is awesome and it hasn't even gotten to the good part yet! :P
| Mooncatcher 1/23/09 . chapter 3
Okay. Here's a good one: My lips are skittles, wanna taste the rainbow? Hahahahaha.
Poor Shikamaru. No idea what he's in for.
Fab story! Love it!
| laughingstick 12/11/08 . chapter 3
lol the pickup lines rock XD
what? u haven't updated this story in a year? UPDATE I DEMAND YOU UPDATE!
great story btw, and especially humourous too. and lastly, UPDATE! i wanna know what happens!