|Reviews for The Pitfalls of Seduction|
| village girl no. 3 9/17/07 . chapter 3
awesome! loved hinatas line...my fave one ever tho is...do you beleive in love at first sight? or should i walk by again...
lol...so glad you updated..you should try that more often..lol
| encyser 9/17/07 . chapter 3
Um, speaking as a guy, no man likes to be hunted down. Can't you give him some defense.
| yumi-maki 9/17/07 . chapter 3
Oh dear...a pick-up line? That is by far the WORST idea they could have come up with. But that just means that the next chapter will be uber-funny. This one was pretty good too - I really like the little pieces with Shika. Can't wait for the next update. OMG! And the Temari part - LOVED IT!
| WeHoldTheseTruths 9/16/07 . chapter 3
omg i love it. i cant wait for your next update
| MystiKoorime 9/16/07 . chapter 3
YES! AN UPDATE! Haha. Glad to know the story was discontinued I really like how this chapter turned out. Cant wait to read more!
| tomboy14 9/16/07 . chapter 3
please tell me you're going to update soon! this story is amazing, despite the long time between updates! you're an amazing author, and execute this so well! god, i both love and hate sakura in this, and shika's impending doom is awesome.
| ohwhatsherface 9/16/07 . chapter 3
YES! I HAVE TOTALLY BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!
You most certainly have not lost your touch. I love Shikamaru. The Gaara having had to explain to Shikamaru thing made me LOL. Grey's Anatomy is the mother of all things inspiring.
| Sweetnevermore 9/10/07 . chapter 2
O i love shikamaru, so i'm excited to see where this leads! keep up the good work!
| yumi-maki 9/8/07 . chapter 2
Then, Tenten and Sakura smiled, identical Cheshire cat smiles.
“Easy. Seduce him.”
Oh yes. That will be very easy indeed. All she needs is some strawberry - scented shampoo...lol. Great fic. Very, very funny. It's amazing how Naruto is always on spot to see these things.
I was wondering when those blackmail shots were gonna rear the wonderful heads. I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh and I love how mischievous Sakura is. And Tenten always goes along with it too. You should write a NejiTen one that's similar to this. Unless you already have...I'll have to check.
Great story! Can't wait for the next update. It was just what I wanted - some nice, light-hearted fun.
| village girl no. 3 6/22/07 . chapter 2
mm m good
| nazzy and jerkez 2/16/07 . chapter 2
OMG! You have to update! I. Want. Too. See. Ino. Seduce. Shikamaru. OMG XD I'd really want that!
I totally love this!
| nazzy and jerkez 2/16/07 . chapter 1
Aw, soo cute! ShikaIno FTW!
Now, let's go to the next chapter.
| Teh K9 1/27/07 . chapter 2
You. Should. Update this.
I'l be waiting! :3
| suzako 1/26/07 . chapter 2
aww, that really interesting *_* please update soon! any other pairings beside shikaino? :3
| Vampire Muffins 12/28/06 . chapter 2
I Love this story, very good! Keep up the great wrting!