 Cringe 2009-10-17 . chapter 36Love this so far. The premise is really interesting, and though I've never seen BtVS before(I know the plot enough to have a basic understanding) I can still follow it. Eagerly looking forward to more! :) |
 DragonSteel 2009-09-21 . chapter 25Hi! I am really enjoying this story so far, it's very interesting, and I like the interactions between the charactrers, and the ideas behind everything.
I am not quite caught up to where you last updated yet, just to Ch.25, but I had to stop because there are a couple of things about your timeline/plot that are confusing the hell out of me.
First of all, when Buffy first showed Sam her scars he said that he had done that. I took that to mean that he sort of remembered doing it, and that he knew he was Alex,. However, just a couple of chapters ago, Buffy said that if Dean wasn't Alex then Sam was, then Sam was all I'm Alex, I gave Buiffy those scars. But... he had already said that when he first saw them. There are also a couple other of things in earlier chapter which I took to mean that Sam knew he was Alex long before the chapter where he sits on the couch and goes through it. Did he keep forgetting that he had already figured it out because of the memory block?
Next. If Sam and Dean were only with John for two years, they wouldn't have as many memories as they do, and they would have noticed that they were growing up too fast, they would not have as much experience as they do, they would not have been able to have gone on as many hunts as they have. It takes time to train someone to fight, and I really don't think they'd be as good as they are if they'd only had two years at it, etc. That being said this is easily explained by Willow just giving them memories (which she would have had to have done already because Dean remembers mom)but so far you have said she just repressed their former memories. Maybe you clear this up later on, but right now it just seems like a really huge gaping plot hole.(Sorry) |
 crazyisgood4792 2009-02-25 . chapter 36Yay Dean!
Poor Dean having to learn all that all over again
Nice update and I'll be waiting for more |
 Rodalinda 2009-02-06 . chapter 35 This is really goo d so far, I hope there more brotherly moments for the future :) I love the sam and dean love lol
I don't think Dean would sacrifice Sam for anything.. he would totally sell his soul to save Sam or do all possible things to save him...but I find it really difficult to think that he would even THINK of killing Sam without going ballistic...or maybe killing himself after he did it, just cuz he's so hung up and dependent on Sam |
 Sparkle45 2008-09-25 . chapter 35Fantastic last few chapters! It's great to have Dean awake again, and more or less himself. Please write more soon :). |
 Anon-i-mous 2008-08-18 . chapter 35 God, Dean was asleep for a long time:P
I hope this isn't too much to ask but could you please write more? this story rocks, it's a wonder why the reviews aren't hitting the hundreds:D |
 Rebel Goddess 2008-02-12 . chapter 35Aw, bless Dean and his determination to forever upholding his own dignity. LOL at damn straight about John being nuts. Poor boys, what a life. Loved the thing about killing Alex to save Liam. More please. Great chapter. |
 sleepy26 2008-02-10 . chapter 35this story is totally awesome i can't wait to read more |
 lembas7 (too lazy to sign in) 2008-02-10 . chapter 35 YAYA! Hoorah for more of this fic! Updates come when I least expect them, and make me smile! :) |
 crazyisgood4792 2008-02-10 . chapter 35At least Dean is up now and it seems like things are going alright
Guessing he merged his memories with Liam
May have said that before
Update soon |
 lembas7 2008-01-30 . chapter 34*dances* Dean's awake, Dean's AWAKE!! YAYAY!! Aw, what a lovely, fluffy chapter! *is exceedingly happy and hoping the prior draught means that there was writing taking place and now there will be more chapters posthaste*
Soo fluffy! *huggles the fluff* |
 crazyisgood4792 2008-01-30 . chapter 34O that would be a weird twist if it was Liam
Maybe they finally combined together
Glad he's back tough and on Christmas aswell
Best pressent for Sam
Pleas eupdate soon would love to find out more |
 Rebel Goddess 2008-01-30 . chapter 34I love the way Sam gives the ring to Buffy and nearly gets his ribs broken for it. Priss is so funny. Dean waking up is very funny especially when he mentions identical outfits. I think he's both Liam and Dean which will be so interesting. More please. Great chapter as always. |
 Anon-i-mous 2008-01-04 . chapter 33 yay an update!
Poor Sammy, This must be killing him.
I'm a bit confused about this chapter though, is it that if they don't remember they'll die?
Anyways good couple chapters, and I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story:P |
 Sparkle45 2007-12-19 . chapter 33Multiple updates...fantastic! Poor Sam, being separated from Dean, and possibly causing Dean's "episodes". Interesting scene where Dean meets Liam. Can't wait for more! |