|Reviews for Of Smiles|
| IronicEnding 11/14/06 . chapter 1
I must say...for you to be able to write about a pairing that you dont particularly enjoy with so much talent and wit thrown into the plot is absolutely mind boggling.
It was a very believable story, despite what oocness you may have been worried about.
I also found it to be quite better than most narusaku style stories that have the two instantly falling in love or crushing on one another immediatly without reason. Its such a harsh transition from friendship to crush level that it kinda takes away from a story. That did not happen here.
It was amazing in how you tied in this little aspect of thier past to an event that occured so recently. Bringing everything back full circle was an excelent idea, and best yet was that it was done in the most subtle of ways.
The one area i did have a problem with was her inability to heal/save herself because of eating so little. That doesn't sound like someone who is the apprentice of a hokage (and thus endures ridiculous amounts of training and beatdowns). Healing an ankle should be minor incomparison.
But in the end...i. dont care about that. The story was cute and fluffy so you deserve congratulations and a cookie. I will extend my congratulations on a job well done...another reviewer will send in the cookie.
I know it might be too much to ask, but if you ever do another narusaku style pairing or decide to extend this story an additional chapter, im sure it would be something many people would love to read.
Otherwise...stay true to your writing.
I wish you much luck and success on your future projects.
Until next time, take care. :-)
| Mr. Despair 11/14/06 . chapter 1
While, truthfully, your fics have been better in the past (Shino Hinata, Your Woman, and fics I can not remember the name of) I still liked it. It was cute, but not to usual standard.
I love Naruto Sakura. And Shino Hinata, but that's for another time.
| Kane the Warrior 11/14/06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so kawai! Think you could continue? Maybe yoiu could make it a series of one-shots. That would be awesome! Well, keep up the good work, and I really hope you'll write some more NaruSaku sometime soon. Bestest pairing ever!
| Inulover4eva 11/14/06 . chapter 1
aw this is so adorable! I love it :hugs: thanks for making it even though you don't like the pairing haha you are such a great author
| dbzgtfan2004 11/13/06 . chapter 1
This is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
| Blahberghy 11/13/06 . chapter 1
I think this is uber sweet. I love it. :) In my depressive midterm receiving state, this is a warm, bright, glowing sunshine ray... and i could go on, but that would just be lame. :D
| lilithstorm 11/13/06 . chapter 1
Quite heart-warming. Nice job.
| Yaa-chan 11/13/06 . chapter 1
I was never a big fan of Sakura, although SasSak was my obsession. Still, after reading this, I'm think I'm in love with NarSak. Naruto's so sweet.
Obnoxious, but sweet. Good job.
| Cutie Blossom 11/13/06 . chapter 1
That was completely and utterly cute! I loved it! Naruto can be such a romantic!
| deformed beauty 11/13/06 . chapter 1
Gosh! What a cute story!
| Meca Vegeta 11/13/06 . chapter 1
| ultraanimefan94 11/13/06 . chapter 1
I loved it! It was such a cute story. This is going into my favorites.
| Eleanor Rigby 000 11/13/06 . chapter 1
O yeah! At last, there's a great NaruSaku fic! I rate it 9/5! lol.