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aSqueeintheDistance
2008-09-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseMore please! :)

luv
squee
aSqueeintheDistance
2008-09-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH. MY. GOOD. GOD. *deep breath* THIS IS AMAZINGLY WELL WRITTEN AND DEEP AND OMIGOSH I AM SO EXCITED I LOVE VALJEAN AND HUGGLES FOR JAVERT!
:D

lol this is good
XD luvs
squee
Yamx
2008-05-17
ch 3,
abuseOh, I really like this beginning! Your portrayel of the characters is very good, and that moment where everything was just too much for Javert was really touching.

I want to see how their relationship could develop if it had the time and space to do so without the permanent stress of the chase.

Is there any chance this story will be continued eventually?
Sieglinde84
2008-05-07
ch 3,
abuseWhat now?

More! :D
LesMiserables lover
2007-12-21
ch 3,
abusewow, this is realy good. When will it be finished? I cant wait
Whisper of the Winds
2007-09-22
ch 3,
abuseI really liked it. I know you were expecting criticism, and I feel guilty for not being able to give any advice, but I honestly can't think of anything to say other than update soon.
Moonlit.love
2007-08-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseOh, I do hope you continue you continue this! It is wonderful! Please?
AmZ
2007-05-24
ch 3,
abuseI like Valjean's tone, but Javert seems somewhat unnecessarily rude. If you remember, he dropped the whole "me talk like a cop to you, convict!" thing - the the extent he ever really did it - when Valjean rescued him and he started saying "Vous" to him instead of "tu." Javert may be an old stick in the mud, but he's actually got no problem changing his opinions about someone very quickly - Hugo makes this explicit. So there's nothing to keep him from at least making an effort to be more polite to Valjean.
The DramaQueen13
2007-05-23
ch 3,
abuseWow, that was really well written! Keep up the good work!
mildetryth
2007-05-22
ch 3,
abuseR & R!
I like this. You have captured Javert's embarrasment and (idiotic) indignation that his own mind won't work along just right. And the idea of huge Valjean shrinking back for small Javert is indeed quite amusing!
Thaia
2007-05-21
ch 3,
abuseWhat's there not to like? It's nice, especially Valjeans use of Javerts title and name. I don't think, that the chapter should have been written totally diffrent.
So, I hope to read you soon again.

Thaia
Sythar
2007-05-20
ch 3,
abuseVery nice. Very nice indeed. It's amusing that Valjean's afraid of Javert even though the inspector is hardly at his best. Very typical of Valjean, though.
I like your take on Javert. Please, don't stop.
M Leblanc
2007-05-20
ch 3,
abuseNice work, again! The dialogue is very good in this chapter, perhaps a little less forced than in others. Your Javert is quite realistic; I'm glad he doesn't immediately become a pile of mush as I've seen before. Anyway, lovely work, and I await your next update. :)
Potato-Princess
2007-05-10
ch 2,
abusePlease update. There are still those out there dying for decent Les Miz fanfiction. :)
AmZ
2007-05-07
ch 2,
abuseA little naive with regards to dialogue. People don't really talk like that in real life today, so what makes you think they talked with such pathos and pomposity in real life back then? If you actually read the dialogue in Les Mis when it's just dialogue - not silly speeches made about the Republic by stupid boys - and *especially* if it's Javert's and Valjean's dialogue, they're actually pretty colloquial and plain-talking. Otherwise, good; carry on.
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