| Reviews for The Better Man? |
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Darkover 4/15/13 . chapter 3Dear SSS: What now, indeed? I don't believe you should let this story stop here. Javert seems just a bit too understanding and willing to accept the reality of his circumstances, but otherwise, I believe you have done a fine job of capturing and portraying the characters of these two men, as well as writing of the strange friendship that seems to have begun between them. I should like it if you would continue this story, even if it has been several years since you updated. Sincerely, Darkover |
TheSweetthings1 2/23/13 . chapter 3 Really good. Can't wait to see the next chapter. |
Keyanna 1/24/13 . chapter 3I love this story. I know you probably aren't planning to come back to it since it's been so long, but if you ever do, I would be delighted. Nonetheless, thank you so much for sharing what you have written. |
Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 3 I need more of this. Now. |
emma 12/22/12 . chapter 3 Write MORE Iys good, but there needs to finish! |
lonelystrangers 12/16/12 . chapter 3 The perfect last sentence in chapter 3. "What now?" indeed... |
lonelystrangers 12/16/12 . chapter 1 Ah, Javert in Valjean's arms. You can write as many chapters with this premise as you WANT. :D |
Fey Beauty 11/17/12 . chapter 3This is a great start! Sure Javert is very slightly OOC, but it has potential! Please update ASAP! |
Guest 9/29/12 . chapter 1 the crying worked. |
Umbrae Calamitas 7/2/12 . chapter 3I love this story already! You describe the emotions each character is feeling in the moment so well, even when the characters themselves don't understand it themselves. I do hope you continue this, as it would be truly horrible to never see it to its end. Umbrae Calamitas Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream. |
smaller 5/27/12 . chapter 1I came back to say how very much I adore this story. Reading it again really made my day so much better, and I owe you a lot of thanks for that. Did you know that an artist on deviantArt has put chapter 1 of this story into comic form? gallery/28145369#/d3ec21p She says she's tried to contact you, but has had no luck... I sincerely hope that you are doing okay. Your story brought me a lot of joy - I hope that maybe this review will bring you some, too. |
smaller 4/21/12 . chapter 3I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing what you have. :) |
skullgirllove 2/29/12 . chapter 3This is awesome! Wish there was more though ( |
crazfool 10/25/11 . chapter 3Love this! Your portrayal of Javert is so good! Even on parts where he would be OOC you totally nailed it! I wish that you would continue this. So sad you aren't though. Ya don't get a lot of fics like this... |
Billie the fourth sage 6/26/11 . chapter 3WHAT NOW INDEED? It's too interesting to leave alone ;_; |