Ep! I loved how you used so much vocabulary! Well, you're in college, I don't blame you! I hope I get to write so wonderful like you do! Amazing for your first FF fanfic, I hope you write more. :)

-Ashie

P.S. It's always good to be honest. Whether you're bitchy or not, I wouldn't mind having a friend like you. In fact, I think I'd be glad to have a friend like you. xD

Really good.. no great story! You captured both Tifa and Vincent brilliantly!

i love the last line. that was a brilliant place to stop. very cute.

Cute!

Never really considered that her scar might not have healed in 5 years.

I also didn't think Tifa would be hurt by Vincent's actions.

It's nice to see another POV on the matter.

And I LOVE "It Ends Tonight."

tis very good for your first! better than mine anyway...my first ever on paper was script writing and stars around the verbs...well...what the character is doing! put up more! I like it!

You are writing another TifaVincent fic as your reading this right? This is such a great fic, I really like it. I normally like CloudTifa and VincentTifa(I haven't seen many good ones, but yours is!) I hope to see more of your work soon!

That was really, really good. ] :favorites:

That was one of the best fanfic about them I read. That was so sweet, I loved it!

i really like it! really good for a first FF fic!