Oh yum. :3 I loved the layout of this.

heh, i like it. it tells a story in one sentence chunks, just enough for you to know what's happening, but just vague enough to leave everything else to imagination.

perfect w

Evelynn

wow! I loved! It was veery cute! Is a little hard to find Balthier/Vaan fics. And I found yours. Congratulations! I'm not so good reviewing in english buy I try to do my best. xD. See you!

Whoa...it's hot in its subtlety.

...my gods I love you for the piercings clinking against one another. Excellent ending.

-coughs- .. Wasn't expecting the nd, but nonetheless, I loved it!

Interesting.

I love the style this was written it. I might have to try it out if you don't mind 3

Piercings and yaoi. What more does a girl need? XD

Ai, hothothot!

Love,

Jaffa

xoxox

I really loved this :) It was nice the way you portray Vaan. Way to many fics make him innocent and stuff :) Plus you did have some cool words in there (yay nice vocabulary!)

PS: I thought the piercings were great! I could totally see Balthier with piercings in his dick.

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Really liked what you did with it (though I was slightly tentative when I first opened it and saw all those short lines.) A little more man sex at the end would have been nice, but you do what you need to with it.

So silly that Balthier has cock-piercings... .

You are talented, no two ways about it.

And I am almost assuredly easily pleased but don't let that discourage you.

I remember reading this back in November, and apparently since I am an asshole I didn't review it. XD

Either way, holy hell, I love your Vaan. Love him. And your Balthier, for that matter, and the way you write the two together. It sounds gushing and obnoxious, I know, but I think it's possible the handful of your BalthierVaan fics I've read made me like the pairing in the first place.

Good stuff.

Different in a most delightful way. Refreshing to see a different perspective of this coupling. I'll think of this when I commandeer Balthier from now on. ::dirty thoughts floating around::

-_-;;

Beautiful and poetic. You didn't have to describe the inevitable sex scene for the readers to get a feel. Very seductive the way Vaan knew he was being followed by Balthier and took (wonderful) advantage of it.

"It’s reassuring, the way Vaan pockets the gil he’s already slipped from Balthier’s waistcoat."

Oh jeez that made me laugh. Reminds me of the 'pirating contest' I had with my ex. Funny stuff.

Neways, nicely written. Poetic, in it's own sense. Luf it.