cute! keep it up! good job!

This was an absolute joy to read. In fact, this isn't even my first time, I go back and read your story whenever I want some light, lovely Seiftis.

AWESOME. You captured their characters very well! :)

I'm not usually in this fandom or this pairing, but this was nice.

What a great story! You have excellent language, though there were a few strange symbols every once in a while in the text. But what an incredible Seifer and Quistis story! It gave me shivers! You should keep writing them. I'll keep reading.

I like the pairing and your story rocks

Really awesome story :) I loved the way the conversation between Seifer and Quistis was so natural sounding and how the description of their actions accented their words.

loved it :)

nicely detailed but not to a point where it became annoying

That very good. I love the setting and the mood. The scene with the old lady with a very nice touch.

I hope you do more QuistisxSeifer one shots.

I enjoyed this piece a lot. In the span of one chapter, you've written a believable but dashing Seifer, a cutely clueless Quistis, and I fell in love with them both. Thanks for the great read!

very cute! arent the ones involved always clueless? poor quistis. but at least they got their fairytale in the end. great story!

omg! this was a great story! Too bad it's just a one-shot.

I've always loved your work and this was no exception. Absolutely love this little one shot which is totally inspiring to get off my butt and write more. I really liked Seifer in this fic seemed totally in character to me.

very nice, a good writing style and an interesting story.

don't know who they are, but glad i read this _