| Reviews for Bridging the Gap |
|---|
satansfingernails 6/6/12 . chapter 1So cute! the POV thing was a little confusing but I always figured it out in the end AND you almost got all my favorite pairings! (Rabid KairiNamine fangirl lol) but YAY YAOI :D nomnomnom |
Axel Danger Flynn VIII 2/8/08 . chapter 1LOVE IT! |
Kida-san 2/5/08 . chapter 1Aw, that really happened to you? I sorry! -pats- Adorable ficlet, though- I nearly laughed out loud while reading (I would've just laughed, but as I was supposed to be studying...) Keep up the fantastic work! Nya-chama |
KingdomHeartsYaoiLover666 5/5/07 . chapter 1Oh! I read this once, then I had to close down the computer 'cause the internet broke. But now I found it again and I can review it! It's really good, I like it! (er... can you tell by the name?) :) |
Addictedtofanfics 3/26/07 . chapter 1I can't believe that actually happened to you! That's terrible. But, at least you managed to turn a bad experience into an adorable fic. You got all my favorite pairings with out any character-bashing. Go you! Thanks so much! _ |
We Will Become Silhouettes 12/29/06 . chapter 1that was the best! you rock! |
King Mana 12/16/06 . chapter 1I find it halerious sad and cute, the situation, Although it would shatter any girls pride. |
sensitive touchdown 11/17/06 . chapter 1whoo, you gotta write more shounen-ai- this' really good. Emo Riku's the cutest _ Haha, I can imagine him going emo over something like that. Silly little Riku :nodnod: Really good oneshot and cute too. :) |
Fonbella 11/14/06 . chapter 1Oh, god... That was freaking hilarious! XDI can't stop laughing. It's very fuuny! LOL Quite simple, though... Anyway, good job and... Well, everyone said they were confused with the switching POV's, but I understood everything perfectly. Sorry 'bout my broken English, still coursing it... P |
ChaosHarbor 11/14/06 . chapter 1that was ur first? It was really good! I loved it! -Ta |
echi 11/14/06 . chapter 1quite a nice story, i like the idea! :3 it's kinda weird when it happens to you i guess...XD but ah well, anyway i wanted to give some critics as well; as this was actually quite nice written it was a bit..erm, confusing at times due to the switching POV's. Maybe you could add whose POV you're changing to at which point. |
twilighttries 11/14/06 . chapter 1This actually happen? That's amazing. I love the story, but you keep switching people and there are some typos, so maybe you can rewrite it and make it clearer? Dunno. Great story, but a little hard to understand. |
lunarxshinobi 11/13/06 . chapter 1Great story! |
StarShine SoBright 11/13/06 . chapter 1hehe, I like this fic. Usually I don't read one shots but this one seemed good. And that happened to you? Wow, kinda cool if your not the girl in between. Anyways, Awesome ficcy! Huggles! |
BloodSkye 11/13/06 . chapter 1First slash, eh? Well you did pretty damn good! |