I think Roxas got the air knocked STRAIGHT out of him. Hard.

hehehe... i finally finished reading your story! what you wrote is very(x30) great! keep up the good work jiandy-san! hope you find the write inspiration to add another chapter and finally finish a fanfic:p(joke). anywayz, you know where to find me when you need help. i'll be looking forward for another. goodluck with your fanfics and with addiction with anything Roxas(hehehe...JOKE)

Oh big clifhanger their...pleae update soon ^^

whoo this is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I love it!! Its so awesome and i can see everythiing happen. Anyway update soon.

~Darkness

Whe, I like this! It's awesome and funny so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

It's good so far. I like the way you describe Axel and what he's wearing it's hot