 LoveofWarriors1998 5/8/12 . chapter 2Awesome story! |
 Twilightfan1209 9/4/10 . chapter 2 Please update or i might cry |
 jokergirl4ever 5/25/10 . chapter 2i lov this story go! fangirls lol keep writing please. |
 Crosslit.Heavens 9/21/07 . chapter 1I liked your first chapter! It would be a bit better if you would be more descriptive, however, and put some paragraphs in the story rather than just dialoug. It makes it more enteretaining to read. Your charecters seem nice, though. I'm getting them a bit mixed up, but it's only the first chapter. Keep up the good work! |
 MewPhoenix 9/17/07 . chapter 2omg i love this!
update soon |
 sk 6/19/07 . chapter 2 Heehee. Me likes this. Please update! |
 Shards of Light 6/2/07 . chapter 2Nice. Looking forward to reading more. Um. Allow me to correct you on a technical detail. Vi(c)ki isn't schizophrenic; she has a split-personality disorder. Schizophrenia isn't the same as Multiple Personality Disorder, but it's a common misperception. Symptoms of schizophrenia are more towards hallucination, most usually auditory (hearing voices, etc.), delusions, sometimes catatonia. Sorry for the medical monologue, but I'm kinda OCD about this. And, I researched MPD for an OC centered Yugioh story I haven't posted yet. It was so interesting I decided to make my character a multiple to begin with, with four separate personalities, and . . . Sorry, I'm babbling and you probably don't care. So, I read the original and loved it, hope this turns out better! (Curse you, Fanfic admins!) |
 Winglet2020 3/11/07 . chapter 2me like this! :) |
 Hawk-EVB 2/24/07 . chapter 2YAY! YOU UPDATED! Grr...My Yugi! *possessive hug*
Anyway, I REALLY love this chapter and I can't WAIT till the next one! -
PLEASE update SOON |
 KamiKaze no Kage 2/12/07 . chapter 2Ah yes, the "Glomp". I pity the poor fools who got their ribs crushed... if I wasn't smirking so much about it. XD
Anyway, I pity the bishies when they wake up in the morning 'cause it is likely that things are gonna end up disastrous. Please update soon, okay? - |
 Mei1105 2/12/07 . chapter 2Hehe! I love this! Its funny! Update soon! :) |
 Hawk-EVB 12/4/06 . chapter 1SWEET! - This is SOO COOL!
PLEASE update SOON |
 KamiKaze no Kage 11/29/06 . chapter 1I'm not sure what to think of this yet so carry on updating this until I'm sure if I'm interested on reading this story or not. Tata! _ |
 Akira Tosiyama 11/14/06 . chapter 1Aw... That sucks. I liked the old one! Anyway, this one's good too! Keep writing! |
 Spirits Of Evil 11/14/06 . chapter 1THIS IS GREAT! _ Update fast please. It's too much fun to read that. Flawless! Ciao! _ |