:D awesome fic...

Vala going nuts is a short trip because she's already crazy? That's funny! Great story! :)

oh!! Adorable, love it!!

Very well written, good dialog. It'd be a great foundation for you to add too, but it stands well enough on its own.

Loevely! You did a great job of writing Daniel and Vala in character. That was a really fun read. Methinks Daniel is smitten. That was very good work.

Excellent story! Welcome to Stargate fanfiction. Here's hoping you stay awhile.

I find Vala so much fun. It was cute to see Daniel flustered yet trying to stay sensible. I like the whole 'potential' idea too. I look forward to seeing where you take their interaction. Thanks!