I have fallen in love...I mean, I don't even particularly like any Death Note fanfiction (why?), but this is...interesting. Kudos, I guess.

Oh, man. This is written so well that it makes me hate Light even more. Sigh, I never hated Light. He was so innocent, such a great kid before he had the Death Note. Don't get me wrong, I think that no matter what circumstances he found the Death Note under, so long as he found it, he'd make the same choice to use it and become Kira, but Oh, Ryuk, if you had never dropped it...

Ahem. Enough crap. Damn Light, such a perfect little actor and feeling absolutely nothing, schooling his every expression to create this false, false emotion that isn't there... ARRGH! But then your last few lines there... I can't quite decide whether that's a hint of some shred of caring or not. I'll go with "not," just so I can keep getting mad at Light. It's not that he killed Ryuuzaki, though that was bad too. I just dislike him because he's twisted and more inhuman than any of the other characters.

And for you to capture that so well that you've got me all fired up with vengeance... that's good writing, man. :P

Really this story is beautiful, is very very beautiful. Raito is IC and perfect in your written.

I wish translate your story into spanish -my idiom- please!

Very Kira-like, you managed to keep him very in-character, and I like how you juggled between thoughts and facts.

Such mature writing and subtle emotions. Complex, yet presented in a very readable and entertaining format. I am impressed.

wow. I think you capyured Light's charactor quite well here. verry well done.

Aw...I like this! I don't quite know what to make of it; it seems pretty complex and bittersweet, but I can sense the general meaning and I really like it! Favourite!

My goodness. You have a knack for getting into these character's minds, no matter how different people portray or interpret their thoughts. The way you write these, it just all sounds so right. This piece was simply perfect. Amazing characterization of Light's mind, and of his perception of L as well especially at the end. You rule.

very sad, somehow. But I love the way it's written, wonderful job!

very well written

Ack, such perfect portrayal of Kira you have! Really well done I must say! _ His inner thoughts are so...full of himself! Just like he. And your writing in itself is easy to follow and such. Only grammar error I found was "he's lost everything. He's lost" would be better fit as "He lost everything. He lost".

Anyhow, awesome work!

HAHA! I bet L would say that too. LOL It was sad but with i twist of dark humor. LOVED IT!

Very nicely done. Very, very IC for Light. I very much like it.

Oh... That was rather interesting. Not bad. :)