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Shanthaia
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseOH, that is great giggle, giggle...it's been a while since you posted this - any chance you ever write what happend in those 2 days?
Xiilnek
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseOhmigod. Oh, my God. You are going to kill me. You really are.

Silent laughter, so I don't wake the sleeping person, but I actually cried a little. I can't remember a time when that's ever happened.

Even though it may kill me dead (dead-er), I really, truly want to read what happened in those two days. Please. Oh, please.

(I love the reactions of the SGC, by the way. And the info about Arm-Fall-Off-Boy.)

...Oh, please. Please. I'm going to go ... away now. Yes.

*So* added to my favorite stories list.
kyuuketsukirui
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseThis was hilarious! XD
lilyoftheval5
2007-12-13
ch 1,
abuseMy regret for you not expanding this is boundless...
skarrah
2007-11-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseLmao. Oh, you just HAVE to write what happened in those missing two days!!
Shathar
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseOk, I have laughed until my roommate (who has no appreciation for FF) thought I was choking.

Nice job.
Greywolf Lupous
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseOh my god... I'm having to wipe away tears here. Please, for all that is good and holy in this world... definitely write the full version of this, if only for:

"... at which point we heard a loud explosion from the hallway and discovered that Specialist Dex's newly acquired power was the ability to shoot laser beams from his eyes. This distracted me from Colonel Sheppard's attempts to beat up Rodney using his own detached left arm. Then the flock of seagulls began to"

What did the flock of seagulls do? The suspense, it's killing me XD Of course now I'm wondering if it was Sheppard's power of Murphy's Law that caused all of it to spiral out of control.

I think the lines that cracked me up the most though were the power assignments:

The holographic screen displayed Rodney's name and, after a moment: POWER - ATTRACTS SEAGULLS.

Rodney just stared. "What? What kind of a lame-** power is that?"

SHEPPARD, JOHN, it dutifully reported, followed by: POWER - LOSES LIMBS UNDER STRESS, LIKE LIZARD.

Because exactly how much stress would this program cause? Hee! Definitely, definitely needing a longer version of this.
StarKat
2007-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI was laughing so hard when I read this story! I really hope you do write a full version of it. I would definately read it!
Hettie
2007-07-31
ch 1,
abuseI really needed this. I can't believe I have never read it. I'd write more, but the mascara is getting in my eyes and burning. Truly funny.
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geek'd
2007-07-24
ch 1,
abuse"And what's the, er, nature of this ... RPG?"
Dead silence descended on the lab. Finally a very small voice from the back said, quietly, "Superheroes."
*giggles*

"Does the word 'In-vuln-erable' ring a bell?"
"Oh please. That was ONCE."
*more giggling*

POWER - ATTRACTS SEAGULLS
*snort*

SHEPPARD, JOHN. FIRST POWER - DETACHABLE LIMBS. SECOND POWER - MURPHY'S LAW
*(not so good) attempts to muffle laughter*
*insane laughter*

At some point while I was reading, I ended up making the rolling chair fall backwards with me on it, and somehow not even noticing until I'm staring up my dad's nose.
...
er, yeah.

but I'd so love to read what happened during those two days.
I'll take the risk of ending up at the hospital.
astridv
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseI started giggling at 'ATTRACTS SEAGULLS' and didn't stop till the story was over...
Durithyll
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuseoi! that was great! the end when they were reading the report was absolutely hilarious! luv it!!
Trishkafibble
2007-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was hysterical! Though you've creeped me right out on DC Comics... =P
BelovedOne
2007-03-13
ch 1,
abuseOh my GOD - PLEASE write more! This is absolutely hilarious! I love that Elizabeth got the cool power while Rodney got the oddball ones that totally crack everyone up!
And I love that SG-1 got ahold of the report and read it first!
Please let us in on what happened during those two days!
~BelovedOne
ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates
2007-03-04
ch 1,
abuseYour fic made me laugh hard enough for snot to go flying out my nose, which while funny, was also somewhat gross. Despite this, I am glad I read this fic, and plan to reread it sometime when I do not have a cold. Nice job.
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