Wow. This had ME breathless. It was so good, but soo short! OTL Why? Why did you end it? WHY? Lol. Great job. :D

guhh. that was (almost) endlessly hot.

Oh man, I loved it. It was brilliant. It was just so... Cain! Playing with Riff, teasing him so... "your cravat is crooked." Awesome. Definite favourite!
~blizzy

SO intriguing! You did a freaking AWESOME job writing this...

And I hope there's a follow-up. But if not, this is still wondrous, hehe.

.oblivion's pen

Teehee, this is pretty cool! From Cain's perspective nontheless! Good job, Loko!

i think you should write more. This is really good. I'm adding it to favs.

that was so cute... you should do another story for when he does snap... *looks hopeful*

Terrific characterization and play of emotions. Concise yet eloquent, one can really see this sequence of events on practically a daily basis. The implied "tomorrow" is also a nice touch, as it is more likely than not that tomorrow in this instance never arrives.

Very nice. Your characterization of Cain is great.

Gah I read your other fic because of a rec and now am so glad that I have this is awesome just letting you know you'll be watched. I love your stories just that much.

this is SO like Cain!

*wobbles* Wah, it's just like the (not so) subtle fanservice that's in the ENTIRE GODDAMN SERIES. It's hot, but nothing happenes. Kaori Yuki owns my soul for that. (And maybe you do now too ^^;)
Yeah. It's good^^ *runs off to read again*

Well, one can't really argue when confronted with "I am a Hargreaves. Write, **."! :D It would be interesting to see just how far Cain can push Riff before he finally does snap! Be careful what you wish for, Cain dear, for you just might get it! ;) I personally would love to see Cain get what he wants from Riff. I'd be good for both of them! Hope he can handle it! :D
Koneko =^.^=

just realy cute!^^

^^Such a happy couple...